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Law's First Beat EVER!!!!

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okay so i fixed my computer and got some loops n shit n decided to make a beat... so don't be harsh on me!!! i'ma beginner lol... but let me know how u like it n if its worthy enuff for me to keep makin beats n what not...
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Its....ehhhhh ...only cuz ur voice on it...u need better intruments to fuck with ...but other than that its not bad at all for it being ur first...big ups
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its not my voice... its a loop that came with the file... i'm downloading some others cuz the other one i used to make that with doesn't have that much to fuck with... lol but thanx for the feedback uppin!
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nice beat bro....I'ma make a classic out of it...

no I'm kiddin'...did seem good tho'
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i think hell yes keep makin beats, i like this shit, dont worry i wont wreck it by spittin on it hah good shit here
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lmao at thinkin this is lawgixs lol.... and it was pretty tight i mean it was catchy and it had a cool feel to it.... it seems like a more of an old skwl sound to it.... i say keep maken beats cuz your only gona get better... good shit
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what you mean laugh at thinkin this is Lawgix's why the hell does everyone keep sayin that haha
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I like this man. It's not the same loop over and over and has a nice flip too it. Def. keep makin' beats.
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get rid of the vocals they just sound corny and stupid beat isn't that bad but it just sounds like some loops slapped together if you don't really know how to write music i'd suggest sampling shit you find as opposed to just slapping loops somebody else made together its alot more rewarding musically btw some of the shit's offkey(another problem with just using loops without an understanding of keys/music theory), the bass & electric guitar loops are pretty dope i'm not really feeling the other ones
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Not bad, Definitely an old school beat, if it didnt have the voice than it would be better, its way good for your first one, keep doing it and im sure one day ill buy one of your beats, And Mutual the reason they said that they dont think its lawgix is because flip said take lawgix voice off, thats when Xtaci said, "lmao at thinkin this is lawgixs lol"
they talking bout the voice not the beat bout how its not lawgix
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I Liked It Something Bout It Had My Interest.. What Can I Say But Keep Making More
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I like this man, and am quite impressed that this was your first ever beat, I've heard some people that have been making beats for quite a while who aren't as good. I'd say continue to hone your craft and expand your methods of making it gradually over time as you learn new things. But all in all this was a solid effort.
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IntrinsicCadence wrote:I like this man, and am quite impressed that this was your first ever beat, I've heard some people that have been making beats for quite a while who aren't as good. I'd say continue to hone your craft and expand your methods of making it gradually over time as you learn new things. But all in all this was a solid effort.
thanx dude i appreciate the positivity towards this beat... i do wanna learn more about makin beats... it interests me plus i can make my own shit for free once i get craftier haha... n sell em... make money for all of my effort haha... but thanx man appreciate it bro...
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