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QwarterZ
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Key Drop 4

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*late night*
I awake

Mother I'm stressin', I'm dreamin' of demons and indegestion
I strung out her intestines, I stretched em just to digest em
I'm catchin' semen and droppin' it on your gleamin' extensions
I'ma blessin' to the evils, the people say I'm just a cause of...
depression? are you sad mommy? my hands are now clawed up
I tossed up, I'm sowwy, I'm tryna find myself a dress like mom does
so I could run outside and call buds, tell em to bring the con-dom's
so I can fuck em, and leave that screwdriver in their ear drums
I can hear someone yellin' at mom, mom are you in trouble?
I would love to grab them and stab them, I hate to bust your bubble
but I think I'm seein' double, I'm sorry I let the draft in let us huddle
or maybe we should cuddle? do you need a bath? I can heat it up
I can see me just, rub your back and wash you up let me just...
ok there's your towel, before you utter another vowel I'm out the cloud
I know your disembowel'd, but pull yourself together before you get out
I hear a knock, knock, I'm sorry but I need to make that barkin' stop
I grab a razor blade, and graze your face, good night mom I got...I got
to make this barkin' stop, I gotta grab that razor blade before it's taken away
*leaves the bedroom*
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Post by MOEstradamus »

lol yea i do see the eminem influence in this piece lol when i was reading some of it i was picturen eminem saying it lol. it was decent flow was there it was a fun read but nothing that will make me look back and say that was one to remember
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Straight crazy kid... the entertainment level of this joint is up there... its most def off the wall and u got mad flow son...i cant judge as for text but i think u one of the ill ones on illest... allways enjoy reading a good drop...
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Post by trubblecleff »

I know your disembowel'd, but pull yourself together before you get out

favorite line prolly the only one i would remember from it cuz of the punch

the whole piece was entertaining the rhymes were nice and the flow was great the imagery was impeccable.but it sounds familiar. i liked it enough i would want the audio
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