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styles can quickly be applied
smiles hit me and open the sky
trials whip me and im a broken mind
unspoken chosen golden boldand untold closin
to an explosive find
an open mic roast on all those to chose to expose their flows composin shows till they blow and become pros theses regular joes know the kind
not on the mound but theyre pitchin projectin pickin perfectin they witness aggression as more popular people diss their obsession
we were kids injectin " The message" into r cortexes
takin in raps like lessons and applyin the style quickly to these textes
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styles can quickly be applied
smiles hit me and open the sky
trials whip me and im a broken mind
unspoken chosen golden boldand untold closin
to an explosive find
an open mic roast on all those to chose to expose their flows composin shows till they blow and become pros theses regular joes know the kind
not on the mound but theyre pitchin projectin pickin perfectin they witness aggression as more popular people diss their obsession
we were kids injectin " The message" into r cortexes
takin in raps like lessons and applyin the style quickly to these textes
i liked this drop flow was nice had some good parts you lacked a lil at the beginning with some simple things but it picked up flow was a lil choppy in a couple lines but other than that nice lil drop here bro like to see you try and add some punches or something in your rhymes but its your style you do what you feel comfortable good job
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i appreciate ur insight mayne ty
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