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Clean out your ears keystyle pt. I

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QjUZ3_NQ1Tc

Yeah..

just...Clean out ya ears..

Clean out ya ears..


Its alot of shit comin your way,
So as I navigate this mental plane,
Just Clear the runway,
My physical takes on emotional states
I swear they faked, Used in only beneficial ways
I dunno why you mad when you was given the choice
Between raisin your daughter or a bottle to hoist
Yeah you an F50, pickin up the wrong habits
Instead of tryin to climb ladders,
Said you wasnt gone have it,
Now you all saddened,
Cuz cryin later means you cant get the last laugh in
Better hire a clown,
Bunch of "NO'BI'DI's" with they "eye" on my crown
But cant sneak around, told em silence IS a sound
Never been such a thing found,
since the earth been round
So why.. would I hear that now?
Listen..just hear me out
A cotton swab to ya ear
Let me clean them out
Live in the mouth til the cave spits you out,
Words for checks, Ima Publisher.. Clearing House


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hey it was tight...i just think the structure was a lil off to the beat..maybe the lines being short.... but all in all u had sum nice vocab n a couple of metas that were cool...Ups
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yeah I see what u mean on the structure
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is your title.........for the lulz



overall a sick piece my dude you really did your thing
I'm diggin' the vibe of the track and your flow is nice
hopefully we'll see more from you....keep writing


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wtf is all this "lulz" talk? whats lulz? kids n your online ebonics..
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ask and you shall recieve my friend

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look it up ...for the lulz of it...and im 27 kid
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kid was was deinitely sarcastic. But in terms of site membership Im older than most these active newbs. I wasnt here when this bs started, I dont get it. Yall oc.
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yea i was being sarcasticfor da lulz of it
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