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Representation......lulz

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Criminal of subliminals, sicker then any individual
mix you with simple syllables, and literally riddle you
no sentiment your rib'll do, a Common God, simple truth
find the bitch in you bring it out and slit wrists in 2
till you resemble whose strung up and to fiddled to use
a middle fuse, mind blown till you see pain is critical
as your spit dribbles through you'll learn your the imbecile
messin' with the untypical, the illest you know my pen'll kill
the pinnacle, get it? your broken down ass has little will
My Nik's is sick, I'ma treat life like ya wife and slice her clit
have her screamin' God, beggin' for mercy I guess life's a bitch
fuck the ice and shit, dudes never knew what priceless is
choppin' rock? I rather divise n spit on the hi hats and kicks
y'all don't supply that shit, I'ma razor blade to the verizon's flip
the horizon's twist on life, treat the game like Brian De Palma
I'm high in the honors, rollin' the constitution lightin' up ganja
I'ma slice of napalm a knife right in the side of ya armor
hittin' soft spots till you lost off the fact I'ma light to the sauna
packin' gasoline smoke, steamin hope and leavin' fiends in ropes
tighten the nicotine flow, second hand murder emphazema a-rome
temptin' the supreme of flow, strike a match I'll demean ya notes
American dream de-composed, mu'fuckers is Kareem with the flow
hook'd, scarce is I, one of a kind, none could compare to eye
I'm flaring mic's, woo'ing crowds, it's a fact so cherish life
test a careless mind and I'll make you see them skirts share a line
embarrass I? never that I'm the only one who rightly shift's a pair of dimes....

psh....lulz @ this
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this shit was dope son... LULZ!!!!
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You got some nice multies man this was pretty tight, worth the read. I'm sad that lulz wasn't worked into the rhyme th

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i'm not entirely convinced this was for the lulz.

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most definitely HOT....For the LULz?...i dunno...Nice multies tho... i read it to the piano meow remix...it was hot! lulz
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okay guys i think you need to finish with the lulz now it's gettin taken over the top
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Absolute »

Nice drop QZ. Got a little choppy in the middle but definitely worth a re read. Well done.

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Naw I take that back.. it aint choppy, Im just high and somebody got the lawnmower goin and shit is sounding musical. My bad homie. But I know you been there. Readin while high can't be good for your opticals..
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