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givin you Diss-intery

Post by eMCee Havic »

yall convulluted brains polluted here to remain cofused an dissillutioned
losing your resolutions with every contusion i infuse into em its proven
that this caliber of rap ambassador will travel in time like flux capacitors
its verble massacre as i loosen the fastener an spill the flow wit chapters for
these rapping folks i jab an poke gouge and smoke drive than laugh and joke
you askin for a quick end i slash ya troat and clean the scene wit ace-tone(acetone "Ass-ih-toe-ne")
i'v had enough your mom, your dad is fuck'd an if you think that is rough
i'll smash ya truck and snatch ya bucks yeah i'm a fuckin savage fuck
so prepare for beef drops like a meat shop that stretches for 3 blocks
i'm the sun u'll see me hot cancerous i leave spots when the free stops
so go head fuck arround get delt wit with belt whips heavyweight i melt spits
you aint felt kid or even belt width you can't even wage war with a felt tip


now itz now itz on... bitches, now itz on
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I was feeling this man, your multi's are always on point
and your rhymes get better every single time
I'm suprised you still got a lot of rhymes to use lulz

either way I was feeling this that Flux Capacitor line made me laugh
some dope shit especially when you get to the moms and dads is fucked
keep doing your thing dawg!
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Post by complexity »

Modern Defiance wrote:yall convulluted brains polluted here to remain cofused an dissillutioned
losing your resolutions with every contusion i infuse into em its proven
that this caliber of rap ambassador will travel in time like flux capacitors
its verble massacre as i loosen the fastener an spill the flow wit chapters for
these rapping folks i jab an poke gouge and smoke drive than laugh and joke

[My favorite part of the drop, the rhyme scheme was sweet.]

you askin for a quick end i slash ya troat and clean the scene wit ace-tone(acetone "Ass-ih-toe-ne")
i'v had enough your mom, your dad is fuck'd an if you think that is rough
i'll smash ya truck and snatch ya bucks yeah i'm a fuckin savage fuck

[Another dope bar]

so prepare for beef drops like a meat shop that stretches for 3 blocks
i'm the sun u'll see me hot cancerous i leave spots when the free stops
so go head fuck arround get delt wit with belt whips heavyweight i melt spits
you aint felt kid or even belt width you can't even wage war with a felt tip

[Solid rhyming]


now itz now itz on... bitches, now itz on
I pointed out my two favorite bars. I'd like to see stronger wordplay, certainly when the topic isn't political. By wordplay, I don't mean this "ace-tone(acetone "Ass-ih-toe-ne")". I don't know quite what that is.
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Post by deafshady »

damn ur multi n flows really well n follow to the point, easily ready n easy visulations so dope bars ever i seen
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i'll smash ya truck and snatch ya bucks yeah i'm a fuckin savage fuck
Going hard on foos...

If u keep murdering like that no one will want to battle you... again i need not mention whats an extention of my last comment...oh well multies off the heezy..flow as well..and just plain nasty with that line up there...Jeez
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