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Gods premonitions to a thug

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Sripted n depicted in ways thats infinite is my mischief
I rip shit and flip spits from love to hate like im drunken
Swinging at nuthing but hurting all i love ..bloddy knucles
Inside a pristine glove, Seeing double i Pissed on lawns
I stumble into the voice of god, humbled a choice i got
My dreams aloft just ta wake n drop, high falls ta stop
Like lights, cops.. when life's robbed a heart throb
Adrenaline pumped my heart stops like heroin drugs
I zeroed on thugs with slugs and Xed marks on the spot
Prints on the last shell as it drops in a glimpse a thougt
Of all past tenses got tension all the blessins wasted
Lost faith in living till god placed a mission to switch it
This gifted premonition is all im missing ...amnesia
Or all this reefa.. gives demolition but time is tickin
Cuz if im not in prisons pot to piss in then im still livin
Breathing this sign ta give what i have taken..back
For a lack of what i had ta get thru what i snagged
Ta pay for what i cant give back...................Life
Last edited by FlipSide on Thu Jun 03, 2010 11:36 am, edited 1 time in total.
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My dreams aloft just ta wake n drop, high falls ta stop
Like lights, cops.. when life's robbed a heart throb
Adrenaline pumped my heart stops like heroin drugs
I zeroed on thugs with slugs and X marks on the spot
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Swinging at nuthing but hurting all i love ..bloddy knucles
Inside a pristine glove, Seeing double"

shit sounded dope to this beat i'm bumping

good read man shit reminded me of some old school hip hop. good shit.. but could easily misinterpperate the flow.

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How u mean.... im tryna get past the misinterpreting part...
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mayne this wasnt bad you startin to get back into it now, not bad with the vocab and the mutlies and the flow i liked over the whole piece good shit dude keep it comin
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
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