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deafshady
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inner self

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consider this my last post since they say i dropped too much post.. so i ll be not posting for a while but i will leave the feed to yall... so here it is

(Verse 1)
The self is a funny thing, it's seperate from anatomy
it's not bound by physics and such things as gravity
it's moldable and maleable, many sections make it whole
the self seems to be the minds reflection of the soul
a command center for your cells to rule the population
its an inner being of energy that fuels imagination
being selfish cages it, and keeps the light inside
being selfless releases it and lets the light fly
you must open your mind to the endless possibilities...
of what you're capable of, you can't pretend to have abilities

(Chorus X 2)
Myself, himself, his self, herself
everyones self somehow affects yourself
yourself somehow affects everyone elses
so you get the idea of what mental health is

some people meditate to improve the connection..
between mind and self, to smooth imperfections
and block rude interjections from negative messages
this acts as a layer of protective flesh, it is.
like text from exodus this intellect is respected
and will be pondered upon in introspective reflection
don't interject with objection or try dissectin this lesson
this invisible knowledge answers all guesses and questions

(Chorus X 2)
Myself, himself, his self, herself
everyones self somehow affects yourself
yourself somehow affects everyone elses
so you get the idea of what mental health is
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Re: inner self

Post by eMCee Havic »

the whole first bar was dope man, good choice of wording and meaning.. great shit stayd on topic. kinda a retrospect into ones self i dug that..

and fuck them haters sayin you post to much they can B jealous..

just work on your pieces longer
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Re: inner self

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lul modern,mchavic i ll keep post longer but when i post alot i rarely get feedback so i rather one a time bro n ya know how good i am so thaks for ur support mchavic bro!!
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