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Failed active collab scripts

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This were the verses that i wrote for the active collab that were not up to par in written...so i did not wanna just waste em...so i raped deafshadys 4th beat with it lulz...i did this last night after yall signed off and i was bored so its not mastered..also because when i bounced it, it accidently mixed down and my computer battery died after that...so this is the only copy i was left with...so with out further due... By the way deaf really did not make this beat..couldnt have.. Play>>>>>
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mayne it's the shame you aint got the vocals to this i could've gave you'em back clearer and you coulda mixed it from there not bad though a good listen
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
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Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
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For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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good flow. and a different voice. i am realy
digging this. no need to be on that "nigga" shit though.
this is tight... good shit.
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ahhahahahahah @ Ruggeds comment
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yea i know.... i did not get to edit it... it was supposed to be mixed so that it sounded tight and i was planning on removing it..or editing it so the shit would sound right...but oh well ...thanks for the feed lone... the peep and say nothing move... i dunno what to make of it....got sumthing to say while not saying nothing? It says a lot..
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sick writing, I dont know how it wasn't good enough, probably bc they couldn't flow it like you did on this beat here..proper my dude, keep up the good work blood
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thanks bro... i thinks its mostly cuz of the quality man
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SAVVVVVVAGE

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^^^ I Think This Is One Of Your Best Pieces As Well. "I Rest in Piece Where The Rest Rest in Pieces" That Shit Was The Flu My Nigga
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thanks for the peep fellas ...appreciated
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yea dawg this shits ill. i appreciate u puttin ur verses to work. lotta cats jus toss verses they cant use. this was ill for what it was. i like veddy mush
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Dude, your energy, flow and delivery is epic, im digging thoughs alone lol, the hook was... o wait there wasnt one.. lol, you def gotta stop being a rap tease homie, give us a full track.. what i heard here you could could kill a track.. keep it coming
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Post by STUD_PHaMOUS »

pretty decent, just work on getting every word out, i have that same problem lol.. but better quality & mixing is most def needed
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