Jack Da Rippa -vs- R.E.I.

[JDR]

14 Lines
House Rules
Due 24 hours after check in.

G/L

[JDR]

Where you at homie??

[R.E.I.]

Yea, check

Give me a minute tho dude, I been HELLA busy

[JDR]

I got shit to do too so I aint sweatin' it.

But Look here Duke..


I'm flossin, that's well wrote Jack, so Tell those kats.... I'm bossin', they hell hole raps
So yea, Often, the shells gon' splat, while I'm runnin' "Circles around R" like "Crossin' Railroad tracks"

The coldest core from the flow that tore ya open pores till ya over sore, nigga know the score
Jack Da Rippa, the name is noticed more, while this nigga jacked his name from a clothin' store
http://www.rei.com/

Oh, it's war, I tend to vent on a page, flows that blaze to rip a spit in a rage
Kick tha shit in ya face, while RE "Hold as much weight" as "50 Cent on a stage"

Kids a bitch in a phase, I never seen / felt nothin, so RE' fell from it
So no wonder I'm quick to put "RE in Line" like "Replied Email Subjects"

These shells buck quick, it's tough bitch, come with ya weak text force
Defeats best course, coz nigga gettin' more "holes around his knees" than some "Cheap mesh shorts"

For us to beef feels silly even though I’d be Relieved to still kill RE
He aint slow, but everyone know that “RE Tard”, like a “fatigued Hillbilly”

Even ya peeps will feel me, look nigga, I’m stalkin’ ya block man
So when I start to throw punches, they quick to “Daught Ry” and I aint “talkin the Rock Band”

G/L..

[R.E.I.]

Yo I'll degrade this second rate joke when these lines are done
Killin jacks fairytale of beatin me like "Fee Fi Fo Fum"
This placid whack "cee is draining" like the sea tides in sun
"Rippin this Jack" asses black ass like "pre-trial fun"
Three vital puns* in this battle took away your life and
I think I should be Jack da Rippa the way I'm rapin this vagina*
He's the lamest with his rhymes like he's incapable of tryin
Everything he raps is fake and cheap like he was making them in china
On the paper he's a liar cause he's takin all his lines from other sites trying to fit in like a "gangster in a choir" *
But it ain't what you've acquired so get mad if you want
It ain't fair and it's barbaric, but you're gettin savagely stomped
Call it a "mandarin taunt" but I don't need a stab and a punch
Cause I just took your ass to school like I was baggin a lunch
But you're an adamant punk for wantin to mess with me
Essentially, I ended "RIP" here, so "Rest In Peace"


Vital- having remarkable energy, liveliness, or force of personality: a vital leader.
Vital-destructive to life; deadly: a vital wound
pun- punishment
also a word with the connotation of two meanings
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jack_the_Ripper




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[Munteskue_lol]

punches- REI
multi- REI
personals Jack
flow REI
complexity/creativity- Jack

Vote- REI


Damn. Not what I expected. I think Jack definitely could've won had he not underestimated somebody new, cause I've seen way better shit from Jack that could've blown this battle out of the water, but... for what was posted, REI took it.

[JDR]

rofl...Uppin' for some votes!!!

[NoVeL]

Close Match But Here's The Breakdown With 30 Pts Being A Decent Drop..

Jack's Drop

I'm flossin, that's well wrote Jack, so Tell those kats.... I'm bossin', they hell hole raps
So yea, Often, the shells gon' splat, while I'm runnin' "Circles around R" like "Crossin' Railroad tracks"

Played Concept But I Loved The Wordplay Here 5/10

The coldest core from the flow that tore ya open pores till ya over sore, nigga know the score
Jack Da Rippa, the name is noticed more, while this nigga jacked his name from a clothin' store
http://www.rei.com/

This One Had Me Rollin 10/10

Oh, it's war, I tend to vent on a page, flows that blaze to rip a spit in a rage
Kick tha shit in ya face, while RE "Hold as much weight" as "50 Cent on a stage"

Decent 6/10

Kids a bitch in a phase, I never seen / felt nothin, so RE' fell from it
So no wonder I'm quick to put "RE in Line" like "Replied Email Subjects"

Hahaha 7/10

These shells buck quick, it's tough bitch, come with ya weak text force
Defeats best course, coz nigga gettin' more "holes around his knees" than some "Cheap mesh shorts"

6/10

For us to beef feels silly even though I’d be Relieved to still kill RE
He aint slow, but everyone know that “RE Tard”, like a “fatigued Hillbilly”

Spews Milk Out Nose 8/10

Even ya peeps will feel me, look nigga, I’m stalkin’ ya block man
So when I start to throw punches, they quick to “Daught Ry” and I aint “talkin the Rock Band” Decent Closer 8/10
50 Pts. Above Decent Drop

R.E.I's Drop

Yo I'll degrade this second rate joke when these lines are done
Killin jacks fairytale of beatin me like "Fee Fi Fo Fum"
Meh 3/10
This placid whack "cee is draining" like the sea tides in sun
"Rippin this Jack" asses black ass like "pre-trial fun"
Snickers 5/10
Three vital puns* in this battle took away your life and
I think I should be Jack da Rippa the way I'm rapin this vagina*
Coulda Been Worded Better 4 A Stronger Punch 4/10
He's the lamest with his rhymes like he's incapable of tryin
Everything he raps is fake and cheap like he was making them in china
OoOo 7/10
On the paper he's a liar cause he's takin all his lines from other sites trying to fit in like a "gangster in a choir" *
Lmaoooo 8/10
But it ain't what you've acquired so get mad if you want
It ain't fair and it's barbaric, but you're gettin savagely stomped
Talkin Shit 5/10
Call it a "mandarin taunt" but I don't need a stab and a punch
Cause I just took your ass to school like I was baggin a lunch
Weak Played Concept 3/10
But you're an adamant punk for wantin to mess with me
Essentially, I ended "RIP" here, so "Rest In Peace"
Played Concept 4 Closer 5/10
40pts.

Both MC's Had Strong Drops, But Most of R.E.I's Punches Were Either Played Or I Heard em Before. However It Was A Relatively Close Battle Because I Think Jack Sightly Underestimated You. But That R.E.I Clothing Store Personal Had Won It 4 Me.
Winning With A Difference Of 10pts, My Vote Goes 2 Jack Da Rippa!!

[JDR]

thx 4 votin' uppin..

[360]

Entertainment - Jack ( Close to being a tie )
Flow - Jack ( Kept his bars a bit more compact than REI did )
Multis - Jack ( He just flat out had more. )
Personals - Tie ( There wasn't really anything personal exposed in either. )
Punches / Nameplay - Tie

Jack gets my vote

[Dynamiq]

i don't really have to break it down as much seeing this was completely one sided in jack's favor, he just had the better punches and his nameplay was witty as well. rel you just need to pack better setups and get your finishers out of the way faster.

V/Jack

[JDR]

Thx 4 votin'. Close this ish. & Yea. I rushed the hell out of that drop. No excuse tho, i underestimated you and will gladly give you a rematch sometime.

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[vim]

I agree with Dynamiq. I don't know what battle some of you were reading. REI had some cool lines, but nothing compared to Jack.