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Fallen (Heaven & Hell)

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I am the one who became crushed by vanity
caused by hatred, a love for lust and calamity
viewed by the beautiful as a muse
a burden to humanity, a carrier of the abused
the most demanded beast upon the truce
a re-enactment follows with worldly views
a switch hitter boasted by the confused
the anti, the hero, the villian, triple dueces
my vow is to correct the rightly wrong'd
to wrong those who have done right all along
as they send they're stallions ridden by their soldiers
waves of battalions couldn't construct my composure
self destruction they pray for the withdrawal
in awe as the skies are covered in the dark
lit up by the arrows they shot to the heavens
the screams are heard as pandora's box is severed
drawn from the gates, screeches of anger
the enviroment is danger every living thing endangered
the floodgates are open and terror shall reign
for 40 Day's and 40 Nights, the dreams have came
that one day they'll let me back into they're empire
and there I shall no longer serve...........they will call me sire
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The divine, the hate, the love, jealousy and pride
I am all incarnate, fallen from the heavens, watch our worlds collide
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I am the one who became crushed by vanity
caused by hatred, a love for lust and calamity
viewed by the beautiful as a muse
a burden to humanity, a carrier of the abused
the most demanded beast upon the truce
a re-enactment follows with worldly views

Nice!!!! Good thought to put ur self in the position of a fallen angel.... or maybe even Lucipher... Planning to be called sire... Hmmm ... Good thought stimulating piece... Which gives me an idea...has anyone done topical battles or contest... Poetry contest? Maybe the sites not active enough for that... But yea.. I def like this piece...
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Re: Fallen (Heaven & Hell)

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I tried to make a poetry/topical battle go down once... no one went for it

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well im dizzzown and i will own
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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