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Where I'm At #2

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Welcome to my glorious state; where rhymes are priced at an affordable rate/
it seems that the more that I make, the shorter the break/
I'm at a historical place, cats need to adapt to my metaphorical taste/
Ians back, what a horrible fate, that surpasses torture and rape/
fast forward the day when Reality strikes, I'll Go Gather my might/
MC's better be Da Vinci, if they plan to paint me in an unflattering light/
rather than write, these hacks seem to like just beefing with me/
too many shots taken: all I see is a weekend emcee/
I completely believe, battling me that they'd stand no chance/
cuz my talent outweighs theirs like Rosannes compared to Lohan/
woah man, its like I'm God inspired, when shots are fired/
my career is, always moving forward, like Amare stoudamire/
I will not retire, I'll keep murdering rappers, in this bloody slaughter/
taking a part of your sole like having an ugly daughter or muddy water/
kids have nothing to offer: while I'm ranged with skill, dangerous still/
when I aim this drill in your membrane, expect stains, brains will spill/
I'm set up for the heinous kill, name at will, who could attack the hardest/
Plex will run circles around these dudes with a pen, I'm a fucking tattoo artist/
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i liked this alot maybe more than #1 multis like always where on point good over all content id give it a 9/10
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Thanks for the feed. I will say that there are some subliminals in this drop, a few of the bars might come off a little more complex, if you think of them in that context.
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It's hard to critique your drops when they're like this cuz the flow was great, multi's (as per usual) were on point, and punches were there. What really got me was the rhyme scheme though, especially in this bar:

kids have nothing to offer: while I'm ranged with skill, dangerous still/
when I aim this drill in your membrane, expect stains, brains will spill/

I wanna collab with you so PM me bro.
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fast forward the day when Reality strikes, I'll Go Gather my might/
MC's better be Da Vinci, if they plan to paint me in an unflattering light/
rather than write, these hacks seem to like just beefing with me/
too many shots taken: all I see is a weekend emcee/
Dam... that was a hot couple lines...and the following ones were tight too..but these stuck out
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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"I'm at a historical place, cats need to adapt to my metaphorical taste/" -- I've been writing long enough to notice a "subliminal" when I see one. 8) No love lost tho.

But yea... This was ill to me. Didn't know you had the passion for ripping it. Never judge a book...etc etc.

The Da'Vinci and Amarie punches were two of the nicest lines I read.

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Rugged Eros wrote:
my career is, always moving forward, like Amare stoudamire/
I will not retire, I'll keep murdering rappers, in this bloody slaughter/

I'm set up for the heinous kill, name at will, who could attack the hardest/
Plex will run circles around these dudes with a pen, I'm a fucking tattoo artist/
You had good multi's as always, that Rosanne punch wasn't too good though, since you have good structure with your multi's you should try writing a storyline piece sometime.
I'm not a good fictional writer nor am I musically inclined, which is said to be related. That's why I write about politics, religion, current events, etc. In general, that is what interests me anyway. Occasionally when I do story tell, its more about my life or about writing. So, I've done it.

As for the punch, it surely wouldn't rank up there with my best, but I don't see the face value problem with it. Rosannes talent does outweight lohans in every possible way.

This drop right here is more of a freestyle piece for enjoyment. It surely isn't the kind of drop I'd like to see upped four months later.
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Now. That isn't that a good punch.

Good call.
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Flow And Rhymes, Check. Comma Abuse (Jay-Z Jackin Motherfucker), Check. Creative For a Self Hype Drop Good Balance Of Punches And General Quotables, it's Well Balanced Drop Basically. u Seem Pretty Good at Dropping The Same Verse Over And Over With Completely Different Content (That's a Good Thing Btw).
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I love this piece gurl dope verse

nice flow
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I love this piece gurl dope verse

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