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Just a bit of fun. No srsbizns here.

Post by Brah-Vo »

HAI GUYZ
It's raiza sharp writin a bunch of bars again
And you know my dope turned on like Rell around Harlequin
Man im just playin rell is dope for real
But lemme propose a deal,
finna put all these dudes in a comatose for real
all these new cats write loose raps
like the hair on chew's back
so these whacks stay played like how a hoe would feel
So imma be forced to bite heads like these lames named holyfield

OMG seriously, but im not really usher
but i'll explode through your nose like hot english mustard
illest finna have A LOT of dead deers call these losers bambi
coz i'll count to ten and make em sleep like im super nanny.

and in all seriousness, these newbs as a collection would probably come up with:
oh my gosh shut up raiza, we can't stand ya
we'll leave this yellow skin bruised like a rotten banana
LOL. sad...
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Post by - Mutual - »

where've you been dude, nothin spectacular here, a couple a funny bars but nothin i'd be too proud i can tell you are just messing around
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Brah-Vo »

man just chillin.
starting to rap againn.
thought id mess around with a few bars to start off with, drop some names haha.
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Post by FlipSide »

As far as this piece goes............I dunno?
Nothing spectacular exept for that banana line which was....Meh...
Man im just playin rell is dope for real
But lemme propose a deal,
finna put all these dudes in a comatose for real
I dont even know a rell but im shure he would not be impressed... i think if u were callin people out u should have a lil stronger........ Other than that... im the new guy...hi
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Post by QwarterZ »

lulz^^^^^^^^^^^^^

either way this was cool, seem'd like you was toying around
which is all good, but needs a bit more style to it
but then again this was for fun, so I can't say much
except..........keep writing
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Post by FlipSide »

He allways Says that^^^^
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Flip...
hit up some illest history haha.
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Post by HKX »

haha u need 2 drop another like dis, dis was funny yo had me rolling nice drop.
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Post by FlipSide »

maybe i should right.... lol ... fuck it tho... Look foward not back.. so drop some hot shit dude
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