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It's like.............

I'm suited to your analogy, descriptions and faculty
I'm part of the group but found outside of the anatomy
stressed to do what you expect askin' the crowd to answer me
they watch me as I run back and forth waitin' for tragedy
stylin' on myself, I hit the ground lifeless and anger'd
the mic is my hanger, it's around my neck, tighten'd by strangers
they say fuck your flow, your words and your life it's a phase
sure they'll change their minds, we might exchange our rhymes
dance around the topics that came and left, the strangest types
we are weird, but we find ourself tryna find some kinda acceptance
it's a ghostly figure thats holdin' us the lines is non existent
I might get twisted just tryna find or tryna define existence
some people just want to be real others just might get indignant
we try to exist between the lines that might hold us up
throw us up, pour a little liquor our try to expose our guts
no one knows of us, but behind that box is a unknown unjust
I cannot compose enough love to shine our slide out so I'm just
goin' to continue to be.....this......puppet
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the mic is my hanger, it's around my neck, tighten'd by strangers
they say fuck your flow, your words and your life it's a phase
sure they'll change their minds, we might exchange our rhymes
dance around the topics that came and left, the strangest types


that shit right there was dope QZ real nice flow to it. good multis flow structure on point my dude. diggin the topic of the shit.

keep em droppin homie
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damm i liked this piece alot, the rhyme structure was a bit messed up but i liked it flowed well in my head and some of the multies were nice as hell

I'm suited to your analogy, descriptions and faculty
I'm part of the group but found outside of the anatomy

soon as i read that i was like Ohhh damm this is gonna be a nice piece and it was good read Qz keep doin ya shit
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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I'm suited to your analogy, descriptions and faculty
I'm part of the group but found outside of the anatomy
stressed to do what you expect askin' the crowd to answer me
they watch me as I run back and forth waitin' for tragedy
stylin' on myself, I hit the ground lifeless and anger'd
the mic is my hanger, it's around my neck, tighten'd by strangers
they say fuck your flow, your words and your life it's a phase
sure they'll change their minds, we might exchange our rhymes
dance around the topics that came and left, the strangest types

I dont give a shit if its half a verse ok.... I liked this part...why?...ok the last couple drops i seen from u have this mood..and its a me against the world type shit... i like the fact that U can take time to post a different view of things... not the oh im the best and ill kick ur ass type verse...i appreciate the detph u brought in this drop... got some heart in it....Purrdy dope..keep writing lol
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