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eMCee Havic
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House of Cards

Post by eMCee Havic »

these bad habits,
i cant seem to shake em i'm losing patience
headin for a brick wall swervin on the pavement
i got a makeshift house of cards
and a storms coming to break it
sometimes i dont know how long i can take it
so i'm smoking drinkin an pill poppin to get waste-d bodies deprived and shakin
from all of this shit that i have taken
its making a common crook into the hard edge
fucked my life wit broken rules
and i'm steppin towards a dark ledge
fightin and fightin denying an tryin
not to face facts so i'm lying and hiding
they want me behind bars dying while waiting
so im on the run wit no way out
dont believe in god but ready to pray now
paranoid so i'm tryin not to have a day count
before i'm caught and robbed of my life
i'm a man so theres no sobbin at night
a wanted criminal so i'm dodgin the lights
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Post by JDR »

Flows a bit choppy and it made it a bit hard to follow but I like the storytellin'. Nice drop

its making a common crook into the hard edge
fucked my life wit broken rules
and i'm steppin towards a dark ledge
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