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Post by Shady_08 »

New guy on the horizon... hope you like it! peace all! :)>-


Let's pretend that airplanes in mid-air motion
Are like falling stars, falling in the ocean
The waves of the sea, represent my emotion
My passion and devotion, my implosion
I collapse around my heart, just fall apart
My dreams of being big, just felt apart
I'm right back to the start, where i begun
With a bottle of pills, a knife and a gun
So far away from the sun, so cold and freezing
On the wing of an airplane, cold and sneezing
Bleeding my eyes out, time flies out, crying
My life time's out, slowly and lonely, i'm dying
Trying to get out, i shout without my voice
Let's pretend that life's a game, just one choice
Just a noise without music, use it without clues
Let's pretend you can walk on the sun, with ice cold shoes
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stop it slime!!!!!!!!!
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Post by FlipSide »

dude... shady is an unoriginal name... anyways it was heart felt..work on ur wordplay..put some metaphores in there.. and get ur weight up... Oh and i hope u have use of all 5 of ur cences...uNo!
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Post by ScottJames »

wow, this was bad.
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Post by Shady_08 »

i know it's not original but it's my nickname for 4 years now :))...

didn't catch the last one... "Oh and i hope u have use of all 5 of ur cences...uNo!"..... why? :))
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Post by QwarterZ »

I just read this........wowwwwwwww........


stop it slime, you givin' us a bad name
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"wow" in a good way or a bad one?:)))
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