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Heel's cuffed

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I'm O'd hungry so a Diets Blurry
If my Stomach Riots Worry..
Why Judge Me with a biased Jury
they statements like Poi-lets hurried
Violet flurries as I Blow The Haze Down
Flow Fa Flow I'm Always Cage Bound
Goes To Show Can't Level Me No Stage Found
Low To Pro On The Page Ground Plague Town
I'm Like a Ear Plug Solution 'How Aids Sound ..
I Kick Back Twist Sacs Of Piff At a Rate of whats Gift wraped
So High i sit trapped and Break buds like Dudes cheering a Sixpack
Skip Nap's Rather Flick Nats Till Tics Snapped
Like Clock Pics Clicked Back When Papparazzi was On a Dick Draft
Miss That? Miss Me Get Kamakazee'd To a Tic Tac
I See you baiting staking Me out For your Taking Waiting out
Of Amazing staging a Show of weakness ur Pages are Aging
That ain't a bluff so enough Of the acting.. you Suck
Fading ya Phase in got Nuc'd 4 Decades like Raging Asians
I'm The worker you a Maiden blazing what you'll Blaze in 4 Pacing
with Hate in the Making What you State is Just Aching
Cypherwise I'ma Free Mason the Bacon Till Ya Spicey Mouth
Is Slighty Out Think I Ain't Sharp 4 The Worse Till a Blades in ta Satan
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Re: Heel's cuffed

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I Kick Back Twist Sacs Of Piff At a Rate of whats Gift wraped
So High i sit trapped and Break buds like Dudes cheering a Sixpack
This is when u starting to pick it up here... the level u upped from the previous bars
Cypherwise I'ma Free Mason the Bacon Till Ya Spicey Mouth
Is Slighty Out Think I Ain't Sharp 4 The Worse Till a Blades in ta Satan
Ok imma be the asshole and say it... u got a lot of shit going on in ur rhymes and some times its hard as fuck to follow ur flow.. not that it does not it just the way u write.. other than that its an enjoyable read tho...the last line quote i did not get tho.. jus saying.. not the part of what u tryna say but it seems like a bridging line to put a multie in the beggining of the other bar... I wouldve gone well as one of them bars or maybe i got too fucked up last night and im really brain dead right now... but fuck it this my opinion
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Re: Heel's cuffed

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Violet flurries as I Blow The Haze Down
Flow Fa Flow I'm Always Cage Bound
Goes To Show Can't Level Me No Stage Found
Low To Pro On The Page Ground Plague Town
I'm Like a Ear Plug Solution 'How Aids Sound ..
Dayum This Was Copestedic
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