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Ruckus a fagget ass bitch
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Aw, I knew you were soft! That's what all this is about. Mufucka tryin to sound hard after some bitch dumped yer ass. Lol fuckin punk, you aint shit. Your rhymes aint shit, yer life aint shit. Fuckin fake gangsta, yer a fuckin poser. Yer a lover not a fighter. I swear yer JA Rule... Come out tryin to remix Pac's shit, then try to swing at the big dogs, failed, and now yer writin bitch songs. Its fitting though, being that you are bitch made. A real mufucka would never respect your fake ass, fuckin poser. Talkin bout guns and shit, you fuckin walking talking cliche. Ol insecure ass mufucka, tryin to front like you hard when really yer hurtin inside. She didn't lie to you, faggot, you're lyin to yourself. Lyin when you think yer an ill emcee, lyin when you say you'll clap someone, lyin when you think some hoe actually wants to be with yer stank, fake, punk ass. Quit playin games, Young Joke, yer a fuckin punk hidin behind yer cell phone. Can't even afford a computer. Can't even spell computer you illiterate, pussy whipped waste of fuckin skin. Keep living yer second life on Illest, we know yer fake. This mufucka has the audacity to clown another man's lyrics after posting some fuckin garbage like this. Won't log on with a computer cuz you know we'll find yer ass and expose you. Punk ass, get off this site. We don't faggots like you soiling our reputation and credibility. Yer a joke. We're all laughin at you man, even the dudes who gave you positive feedback. You're a fuckin nobody. Ol think yer entitled to somethin mufucka, yer a fuckin rookie son. It shows in everthing you say and do. Learn some fuckin respect. Your parents need to whoop yer punk ass and teach you some manners.

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Don't even come at me with some half-assed, bullshit response like you always do. And save yer "punchlines" and songs for someone who will actually battle you cuz you aint worth a rhyme out of me, punk. You ain't shit. Sooner you realize that, the sooner you will actually improve. Your lyrical ability is nowhere near strong enough to warrant your grandiose, arrogant attitude, chump. You're a fuckin nobody, just like everyone else here (no offense to yall lol). But its all good, you will always be known on this site as Young Jobe the punk bitch, and there's no changing that. Move on to the next site and try again. And a little advice, I suggest posting your OWN material, especially if its your first post. Seat's taken, faggot, get off the bus. But just wait, you'll drop another 10 "diss" songs that don't even really diss us at all. If you really think we take offense to you saying you'll shoot us or claiming that we're gay, you are an immature shitbag. And you'll keep posting your retarded ass responses, totally ignoring anything that was said to you or taking into consideration how stupid you may look. Judging by your level of literacy, you sound like you're one good thump away from being brain dead. So watch your head when you finally do make that walk of shame. Every cat on this board is capable of shitting on you lyrically, so just save it. Besides, I'd bite my own tongue before I'd bite your wack ass excuse for a "style".
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......... Cooooold blooooooded!!!!! Hahaha! Daaaaamn

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ATLEAST I GOTTA GIRLFRIEND.. TWO, RUGGED YO HOMEBOYZ WERE TALKIN BEHIND YUR BAK.. SAYIN U GAY.. THREE, RUCKUS U MAD CUZ I KILLED YO SHIT IN DAT LAST DISS.. FIND A NEW CAREER.. & RAPPIN IS NOT U :) lmao

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^^ rugged eros real pic & tryna frame me.. lol smh

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Lol this dude is mentally retarded for real.

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i suggest all heads look the other way when he post... make jobe aghost fa real... i only read this to see who going hard on him... its becoming a waste of my time...feed the writtens fellas...
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flip die slow... & ruckus muthafuka this aint no muhfukin tropic thunder.. nigga swear he was in the army overseas.. u sound repeated.. faggets like him nvr come bak str8 lol

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Yeah, whatever Young Joke. The fuck have you done in life? What have you accomplished? YOu'd die in Iraq cuz yer straight retarded.
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RUCKUS U AINT ACCOMPLISH SHIT.. BOY U WAS DA WATER BOY.. UR RETARDED FO THINKING THE TROPIC THUNDER WAS REALLY HAPPENING OVERSEAS.. U USE RETARDED SO MUCH, THAT U HANG OUT WITH UR RETARDED DAUGHTER (I FUCKED TWICE) AT DA SPECIAL OLYMPICS.. RETARDED, U SHUD KNO HUH lol

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Well, I didn't know you were a pedophile on top of everything else... my daughters are 6 and 4. See you on To Catch A Predator homie... maybe you could freestyle for 20/20 and try to get a deal that way.
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dont giva fck.. we'll murder that bitch too.. & we coming to murder u too.. handicapped muhfucka.. handicap retarded ass family.. fuck u & yo special ed family.. i jab a dick in ur bitches mouths, havin ur daughter & ur momma give me brains.. ruckus u need a career.. this one fucked u over.. its like how u aint did shit in iraq.. tropic thunder live now, u need stop watchn war movies.. u really b thinkn ur fantasies & closet scenes b happenin'..

GTFO THIS SITE.. I SQUSHED U LIKE THA COCKROACH U R

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