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The Prelude

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The Prelude

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Newest Shit On Da Mixtape Good Quality!!

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dope beat.... im feeling it... ya vocals a lil high.. next... nice lil flow u got there.. Good vocab.. u staying on beat for the most part.. it think it might be ur mic.. u really aint going to hard i imagine if u inflect ur voice more it will damage quality.. but nonetheless u got some metas in there and nice wordplay... nice drop
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Re: The Prelude

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This was purdy dope, the flow was cool
kinda got hard to follow after awhile the beat is overpowering
not for you but I thought you coulda went with something else
it was nice tho', I didn't know you was doing a mixtape
you naughty head fucker

either way this joint was on point
how many tracks you got poppin' off?
anyway you know the routine.........return the love
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Re: The Prelude

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Mos Def.. Thanks Flip & Qwarter
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Re: The Prelude

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First off, either your quality was horrible or the mixing wasn't good cause this sounded bad. But that can't really be helped. Flow was solid, could have been more complex but its all good. I wasn't really feeling the gangsta stuff but you still had some alright lyrics, nice rhymes. Keep working.
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