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Mac · Post by **Mac** » Thu Dec 28, 2006 1:08 pm

This Is One Of The Few "Newish" Shit I've Done lol..

Anyway Feed It.

8th · Post by **8th** » Thu Dec 28, 2006 1:56 pm

eh..it was mediocre. the quality was decent. The lyrics themselves were pretty good. You were off beat in alot of it. It also just lacked emotion. And when shit is kinda monotone, it gets boring. I would get work on delivery, emotion and ridin the beat better.

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Thu Dec 28, 2006 2:02 pm

Word @ Poorly Mixed..Thanks For The Feed Though Man

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Thu Dec 28, 2006 2:52 pm

got the game on lock in my name im blotched? i never raised a glock i restrained to not

I liked that. A lot of nice lines. Even though you were off beat sometimes the multi's made it keep some flow to it. Like that line I quoted up there before it their is like a second pause. Not a very good transition. Lol

Not bad though. Just work on riding the beat better. Or picking beats that you can ride better. And mixing or w/e

Good job - Im looking forward to the whole song

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Thu Dec 28, 2006 3:08 pm

"Got The Game On Lock, Hear My Name On Blocks"***

Lol, Thanks For The Feed Back Though Man, Appreciate It.

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