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House pt. 2

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If y'all remember the first one.........

Modern scholastics, I make a whole crew backlip
kick they own ass, homey could get a fat lip
I guess the pussy is straight ass, like a dead lay
even if you pronounce it wrong, yous'a seg-way
gassed up to go a few miles, now whose wild?
get their top chaffed up, just like the roof tiles
I could make the whole room smile......funhouse
as the words run out, the people in the closet, come out
I turn em to dust heads, rabbits and bunnies, fuck now?
the commotion is wylin', tossed out the window...Ron Browz
see I got this whole system on Brinks, so just calm down
recreation of my first drop got me thinkin' that it's all clout
wrong routes, the wires tapped into this old broads mouth
chopped her hedges, left everything else washed out
gargle this then leave, see how I got this whole plot out?
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Re: House pt. 2

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i just like reading your drops dude... it just flows seamless to me....i think u made use of every line well.. i dont remeber the first drop but this is tight.. i dont even know what to quote here... but imma pick the ones i like
gassed up to go a few miles, now whose wild?
get their top chaffed up, just like the roof tiles
lol
see I got this whole system on Brinks, so just calm down
recreation of my first drop got me thinkin' that it's all clout
u should link the first drop.. i wouldve read it after this to get the full effect
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Re: House pt. 2

Post by eMCee Havic »

feelin this shit man been slept on i like the flow good multis stayed in motion didnt fall off too much
there were a couple of lines that didnt match up with the rest

but with the right delivery shit would be poppin

wrong routes, the wires tapped into this old broads mouth
chopped her hedges, left everything else washed out

liked how that shit sounded

good piece man
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