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Kid You ain't Ready Like Catch The Bus
Filmed Like a Angel That's Acting Up^
But Facts Fa Us Is You Wack As Fuck
Ash Ya Dust Got ya Panties In a Bunch
Just To Detach ya Nuts, i'll Cash U Out
To Kinko's Starting Ading Up...
You Shoulda Paid Me Fa Skills
Who's Splitting the bread?
Give my writ tens the cred you've bitten and read
Bite the hand that feeds get a fist To the Head
Sid Vicous instead when I Slip in the Red
To Leave ya body of work Stitched To a Bed
The Skin is Now Laid lets give the Bistriss some Rest
Fake Sits In ya Chest I'm Ripping ya breasts
With shit i collect In Notepads I spit By The Set
a Dozen I got a Gang Of Those
Prop In a War Movie When Hes In His Banga Pose
Ya Materials Remains The Same Rearrange Ya Clothes
Like Well Mannered Hoes In The Long Run This Panters slow
Crack?? No! you Niggas do Con Yay Though Like Amber Rose
CRY BABIES Quick ta Take it All Wrong
Ego's Far Gone The Hated Fall Strong
Bigging Up Ya self Like You Created Small's Song's
Drop The Tales How you Plot To Sail To Pop a Whale
Ya Main Focus Is Ya Poppas Mail U Are Not a Male
Just a Twat Ta Nail At An Object Sale..
Don't Want To Have Certain Topics Bailed Ur On Top To Fail
Like ya bitches tongue disintegrates N gets Replaced with Ya Dinner Plate,
Then ya inner state Make the Same dive Most Sinners Make
Working for the Devil Nine To Five Like Interstate
Ya Hot Trail Went Fucking Cold Like a Winter Mate
Its Like You Wanna Make Out With BURNS Just For Skinners Sake
N Intimediate As One Who Would Skin The Snake, Mentatily Victumized
Listen Guy how Could You Vision i
Ur Soo Close Minded Enlightment just doesn't come Skipping By !
Skip N Sigh i'm What You'll Never Be
What you say you wouldn't wanna be.. Get It Together G
Like Drunken Celebrities you Should Hona Me But On a Soul Tip..
Cage Ya Mind N Let Ya Soul Drift Just To Phase in time
You Old Dick To Be Barking At Me Like An Uncontrolled Pit
So Stop Tryna Bite At Me N Get Cha Extra HOLE FIXED
You a Fairy N I Wasn't In My comfy Bed Told Shit
so i'll Slice off ya Wings Like Sneak Peek, Cold Snips
Aluminum Sally second comers is Who u Unfold With
A Champion? Bitch You don't Hold Shit 1 Dimensional
Like geese you'll change Direction when the poles Flip
He's Washed Up For Him to Claim High Bars Is Fronting
Just a Old Cat No Ones Really Checking 4 Like Five Stars Or Nothing
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Dope drop Haz. Flow was perfect IMO & I liked the multies

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Like Well Mannered Hoes In The Long Run This Panters slow
Crack?? No! you Niggas do Con Yay Though Like Amber Rose
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Re: Suggest to ripp um

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Give my writ tens the cred you've bitten and read
Bite the hand that feeds get a fist To the Head
Sid Vicous instead when I Slip in the Red
To Leave ya body of work Stitched To a Bed
Aha... yea that flows killa
Prop In a War Movie When Hes In His Banga Pose
Ya Materials Remains The Same Rearrange Ya Clothes
Like Well Mannered Hoes In The Long Run This Panters slow
Crack?? No! you Niggas do Con Yay Though Like Amber Rose
I had to read this several times before i decided its sick... Good build there
Bigging Up Ya self Like You Created Small's Song's
Never heard that b4 so i would say thats original
Aluminum Sally second comers is Who u Unfold With
A Champion? Bitch You don't Hold Shit 1 Dimensional
Like geese you'll change Direction when the poles Flip
He's Washed Up For Him to Claim High Bars Is Fronting
Just a Old Cat No Ones Really Checking 4 Like Five Stars Or Nothing
Flowed well through out the whole piece.. had some ill word play throughout.... nothing cluttered at all.. it took me a while to read tho.. Nice Piece
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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