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For The LULz..

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Deadly Visions I Make A Fetus Abort, No Need 4 A Clinic
Bitches Get It, Pussys Didnt, Ill Be A Dick And Run Up In It
Cause Collisions Inside Isicions, Like Im Hittin Pregnant Women
Causing Labor Coffins Filled With Haters b4 They Dropped Kids
Its Sin Incarnate When I Hit Ya Mother Just Ta Break Her Water
Stash Ya Carcass In The Prom Night DumpSter, Get The party Started
Im An AlchoHolic, Love A Bitch Thats BraLess N Packing LargeTits
OverWeight Ass, Gotta Jack Legs With A Car Lift Ta Go Spilunkin
Belly Button Humpin With A Condom N Still Catching Something
My Nuts is Pulsin..They Fucking Swollen From Warts N Whoring
Fuck Boring And What She Into, Im Worried About The Symptoms
If She Dont Bleed Soon Ill Be In Prison For Shaken Baby Syndrome!!!
I Plead The Fifth Tho, And Ill Be In Beast mode After This Liquor
I Didnt Hit Her, She Put Her Face On My Fucking Fist Sir..!!!
And Did I Mention?!!!!!
She broke My Penis Pump, Cuz My Dick Look Like A Babys Arm
When Its Curlin Apples, And Thats Just When Its Being Soft!!
The Envys Wrong, N Its Her Fault She Cant Clear This Bong
Leave That Pussy Smoked Up, Neighbors Be Like Daddy Home!
I Be Bangin Ho's, Like Santa's Crashing Dorms Filled With Em
Got Skill Wit Game, like Pimps That Lay Fins Like FisherMen
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Post by QwarterZ »

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm diggin' this man, the flow was cool
the whole imagery was on point, some sick shit
I wrote something like this just never dropped it anywhere
but word this was dope man, you toying with styles I see
very nice drop tho'

Its Sin Incarnate When I Hit Ya Mother Just Ta Break Her Water
Stash Ya Carcass In The Prom Night DumpSter, Get The party Started
Im An AlchoHolic, Love A Bitch Thats BraLess N Packing LargeTits
OverWeight Ass, Gotta Jack Legs With A Car Lift Ta Go Spilunkin
Belly Button Humpin With A Condom N Still Catching Something
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this was dope man, very siiiiiiick drop
keep writing bruh!
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Man I See You Went With This Shit Anyway haha Yeah I Read Most Of This, Some Funny Shit, Nothing Too Complex Just What Was Requested And Some Nutty Idea's Lol Good Shit Flip Keep It Comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Thanks For The Feed Fellas....
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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