GrimmReaperZ

[crimson]

i rep a NEW REGIME of a RUTHLESS TEAM with LEWDNESS SCHEMES/ I don’t type verses, it’s a ROUSE IT SEEMS/ since my MEDULLA BEAMS verses straight to COMPUTER SCREENS/ DUKE IS MEAN, I’m a SLICK, SLY BIRTH of a demon covered in PISS, FLIES, DIRT// but THIS TIME’S WORSE, before I ever spit a DICK RIDE VERSE, I’ll put this faggot QUIX, SIDE FIRST in a BITCH SIZED HEARSE// my SICK MIND'S CURSED but someone please tell me, what’s THIS GUYS WORTH/ when my talent’s engulfing his frame, from now on...... call it FLIPSIDES SHIRT!!// yeah, that’s a SOLID MIX OF QUIPS from a machine gun teeth & a HOLLOW TIP OF SPIT// no offense but the site’ll never amount to a PILE OR PIECE OF SHIT long as the POLITICS EXIST// still I possess the POLISHED GIFT OF WIT, define me in 5 words or less…..ummm, “the exact OPPOSITE OF QUIX”// lol, it aint complex when I enter view, you’ll see the TITLE I’M DEALT// possess the POLISHED GIFT OF…..great Scots!, I almost RECYCLED MYSELF

[AbZ The Beast]

hahaha..this shit was fire plain ans simple.

[FlipSide]

Dude This Was Sick As Hell... Makes Me Wanna Throw All My White Tees In The Dryer Too LMAO... Dude.. U Nasty I Would like To See U Battle More... Id Def Peep Them...And No Homo.. I Just Thought This Was A Dope Ass Drop

[crimson]

Dude This Was Sick As Hell... Makes Me Wanna Throw All My White Tees In The Dryer Too LMAO... Dude.. U Nasty I Would like To See U Battle More... Id Def Peep Them...And No Homo.. I Just Thought This Was A Dope Ass Drop

^^^lol.... that made me actually LOL...
Thanks for the feed....appreciate anyone taking time to read it ...

[Munteskue_lol]

SLICK, SLY BIRTH of a demon covered in PISS, FLIES, DIRT// but THIS TIME’S WORSE, before I ever spit a DICK RIDE VERSE, I’ll put this faggot QUIX, SIDE FIRST in a BITCH SIZED HEARSE// my SICK MIND'S CURSED but someone please tell me, what’s THIS GUYS WORTH/ when my talent’s engulfing his frame, from now on...... call it FLIPSIDES SHIRT!!//

Funny as hell dude. You're ruthless with the punchlines and none of them are played or even remotely similar to any other style I know. You bring your own dynamic to hip-hop and text writing which is a rare thing to see.

HOLLOW TIP OF SPIT// no offense but the site’ll never amount to a PILE OR PIECE OF SHIT long as the POLITICS EXIST// still I possess the POLISHED GIFT OF WIT, define me in 5 words or less…..ummm, “the exact OPPOSITE OF QUIX”// lol, it aint complex when I enter view, you’ll see the TITLE I’M DEALT// possess the POLISHED GIFT OF…..great Scots!, I almost RECYCLED MYSELF

See, you have semi-complex and witty punchlines that still need no explanations and mastered into a way you could probably drop them over audio and would hit just as hard.

since my MEDULLA BEAMS verses straight to COMPUTER SCREENS

Ha, that's quotable right there. Sick ass line

[Kuhlerblynd]

Definitely feeling the multi's and flow. The whole piece was on point IMO. I wouldve liked it to be a little longer and you continue to put the murder down, but you got the point across. Quit sleeping on this man!
The middle section of your verse was the best to me. Switching up the vocab with words people dont use on a daily basis, but making it come out naturally was a great added touch. Props.