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~Ca$per~ vs. QwarterZ

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~Ca$per~ vs. QwarterZ

Post by ~Ca$per~ »

4 bars lets get it over with
house rules
due asap
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Re: ~Ca$per~ vs. QwarterZ

Post by QwarterZ »

You a ghost and maybe I got this whole shit backwards right?
you ain't got no grind on the board, unless I'm stompin on you and Casper Slide

I'll leave you hung and dry, or scared to face me, lets get close to the fact
I'ma treat it like Mario Brothers and knock out this Ghost from the back...(pause)

you ain't touching QwarterZ bruh, I'll leave ur career 808's and Heartbreak
I guess that's one sad album, only time you touch base is hitting the arcade

so how you going to flip QwarterZ I already gave this bitch hell
you see me drown this kid, then flow over the body like he's a wish well

Casper ain't touching nothing it's obvious he ain't supposed to
cuz the only pussy he scaring is the ones that he's never close to
Last edited by QwarterZ on Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by ~Ca$per~ »

QwarterZ comin hott out the gate on some third grade nursery rhymes//
with the claim of more game then me bitch you need to stand in line//
i rip on this fake for christ sake he cant take it//
qwarters die on this date cause he got raped i just baked him//

leavin niggas in shock and awe as the rook murda this whack bitch//
watch this nigga rock and fall take qwarters to tend to his slit wrists//

casper gon still stay clappin and quarter just cant imagine or fathom what just fuckin happened//
maybe you should just quit rappin cause we know your crew aint strappin//

quarter dolla niggas cant spit when attempting to rip on a hit //
you really think that you could beat me only givin 25 percent//

-- Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:40 pm --

shit i fucked those first few bars up lol fuck it lets do the whole vote thing lol
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Re: ~Ca$per~ vs. QwarterZ

Post by FlipSide »

Punches QZ
Flow QZ
Personals...No One
Nameplay...No One
I Dunno What Else To Vote On ... I Only Have To Say That This Is A Shit Battle... If I Wanted To Read Somethign This Shitty I Wouldve Written A BAttle Verse Too LOL... QZ wtf Man..? U Slackin Homie.. But Casper Was Worse So Vote QZ

BTW Casper Has a million name plays... And So Does Qwarterz...Seems U Guys Did not put effort into this one... AT ALL./.... Took My Motivation To Vote From Under Me...HARD
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Re: ~Ca$per~ vs. QwarterZ

Post by Kuhlerblynd »

OMFG I just typed out this big ass breakdwon and it fucked up.

Aight, Im not going to do it again but here's the jist. Crunch, the only punchline that I saw was the last line. You need to work on your wordplay and punchlines, and steady your flow a little bit.

Q, you had a solid verse with a few obvious nameflips (dunno wtf Flip was talking about cuz both of you had a nameflip), but I also think you didnt put the effort into this that you should have, which could have set you up for defeat against a more talented writer. Over-all though, you have a very solid verse.

Vote goes to Qwartz. Nuff said.
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Re: ~Ca$per~ vs. QwarterZ

Post by Omega Bill »

I'll leave you hung and dry, or scared to face me, lets get close to the fact
I'ma treat it like Mario Brothers and knock out this Ghost from the back...(pause)

This is was the only good bar in the whole battle, honestly.

Both of you need to go harder if you're going to battle.

quarter dolla niggas cant spit when attempting to rip on a hit //
you really think that you could beat me only givin 25 percent//

Talking about bong hits, and how much heat your friends carry is not meant for a battle verse. You wanna talk about bullshit then stick to the Written Rhymes section.

If either of you guys faced anyone else, you both would have been embarrassed.

Both need to come harder in future battles. Qwarterz, you have some concepts but need to deliver them better and hit harder with more elaborate punchlines. Both verses were too simplistic.

This was a weak battle, in my opinion.

Vote: Qwarterz.
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Re: ~Ca$per~ vs. QwarterZ

Post by Kau the Lion »

quarter dolla niggas cant spit when attempting to rip on a hit //
you really think that you could beat me only givin 25 percent//
Only bar worth quoting from Casper. The rest of the verse was just hype and generic bullshit.
I'll leave you hung and dry, or scared to face me, lets get close to the fact
I'ma treat it like Mario Brothers and knock out this Ghost from the back...(pause)
Only bar worth quoting from Qwarterz. The rest of the verse was weak punches. But at least they were punches in any form.

Casper had the Flow and Qwarterz had anything thing else there was to have.

+1 Qwarterz
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