Rugged Eros Vs. Crunch Time

[ThatSexyDude]

THINGS TO KNOW

I CHECK his sites and it said his name was tom so i guess it is..

he has a myspace with no pic,
the rest should be simple haha

SHout out to R.E THOU...COME HARD HOMIE



When my punchlines STRIKE-HIm,-THIS-HOE'S-DEAD, myspace? no one seen ur face, so i guess ur HIDING-WITH-NO-BREAD..
so call urself SLEEPY HOLLOW cause ur a guy RIDING-WITH-NO-HEAD...

i'm like spaniards once my blade TOUCH-HIM,THIS-BULL'S-OVER...you fake hoe, u take loads like u FUCKIN-WITh-BULLDOZERS.
i'm TUCKiN-THE-TOOL-CLOSER, cause everyday i RIDE-WITH-THE-PISTOL??SURREEE..
i fucked ur moms in her office table, SHe was LIKING-MY-DICK-IN-HER...
she got layed, papers all around that bitch..LIKE THE GUY-IN-YA-SIGNATURE..


this HOE's-A-DISGRACE, i'ma SOULJA-WITH-K's, u'll win if i no show'd like HOES in MOST-OF-YA-DATES..
i'm GOIN-FO-DOUGH, your face u aint SHOWiN-SO-GO...ur life's over, ur like a dead snail u aint ROLLIN-NO-MO..

when i heard i was battlin tom, i knew it was easy to BEAT HIM IN MY PLACE..
cause my guns make tom dissapear just like DELETING-HIM-of MYSPACE..

[AbZ The Beast]

i fucked ur moms in her office table, SHe was LIKING-MY-DICK-IN-HER...
she got layed, papers all around that bitch..LIKE THE GUY-IN-YA-SIGNATURE..

best bar by crunch

everything else was kinda eh.

his HOE's-A-DISGRACE, i'ma SOULJA-WITH-K's, u'll win if i no show'd like HOES in MOST-OF-YA-DATES..
i'm GOIN-FO-DOUGH, your face u aint SHOWiN-SO-GO...ur life's over, ur like a dead snail u aint ROLLIN-NO-MO

nothing hit.


rugz

Got an hour, that's cool, ya' just a 'kid in the hall', watch me 'out class' you//
After I 'handle this beef' only place you'll see ''crunch raps'' sell is in fast food/

first line was eh..but the second was real dope.

When the dates due, I always come "ahead of time", betta bring ya best rhymes//
Cuz when it comes to 'Crunch Time', all I see is a bitch barely 'making dead lines'

those 2 bars won this battle..Crunch had a solid flow, but nothing really
hit


VOTE RUGGED[/b solid flow, nice wordplay and better hitting punches

[Kau the Lion]

i fucked ur moms in her office table, SHe was LIKING-MY-DICK-IN-HER...
she got layed, papers all around that bitch..LIKE THE GUY-IN-YA-SIGNATURE..

Only decent line from Crunch and it wasn't that good. Multies felt forced through out and I didn't feel the flow.

Got an hour, that's cool, ya' just a 'kid in the hall', watch me 'out class' you//
After I 'handle this beef' only place you'll see ''crunch raps'' sell is in fast food//

Solid opener.

Look at ya avy, we'll see how far that photo takes you, betta hope Eros don't rape you//
Pokomon? damn dog, I didn't even have to "peek-at-chu" to over "rate you/Raichu"//

I can appreciate some good Pokémon wordplay.

The rest of the verse was pretty solid as well.

One sided battle, though.

All cats go to Rugg.

[Quix]

when i heard i was battlin tom, i knew it was easy to BEAT HIM IN MY PLACE..
cause my guns make tom dissapear just like DELETING-HIM-of MYSPACE..

IMO .. Best line...most of yah shit wasn't hitting tho.


Got an hour, that's cool, ya' just a 'kid in the hall', watch me 'out class' you//
After I 'handle this beef' only place you'll see ''crunch raps'' sell is in fast food//

BEst bar by you .. .and in the battle!



Vote Rugged

His shit came more direct and Crunchtime had some bars that were Far from good!

Rugged edged this close battle!

[Kuhlerblynd]

Breakdown

R.E's verse

Got an hour, that's cool, ya' just a 'kid in the hall', watch me 'out class' you//
After I 'handle this beef' only place you'll see ''crunch raps'' sell is in fast food//

This was a nice opener. You got some good solid wordplay to kick it off, then came with a pretty nice punch to close it out

Look at ya avy, we'll see how far that photo takes you, betta hope Eros don't rape you//
Pokomon? damn dog, I didn't even have to "peek-at-chu" to over "rate you/Raichu"//

The first line was good as far as set-ups, but the Raichu line is kind of a stretch, though I liked the concept you brought to the punch

When the dates due, I always come "ahead of time", betta bring ya best rhymes//
Cuz when it comes to 'Crunch Time', all I see is a bitch barely 'making dead lines'//

Multi wasnt exactly there but I liked the punchline alot in this one. Good stuff.

Betta duck in ya house, get punched in the mouth, this something ya' know nothing bout//
I'm crushing em' now, damn, I 'punched the clock' n now 'Time's running out'//

This line was nice with the multi's. Ive seen the punch before in battles, not exactly flipped like this, but it has more relevance here than Ive seen before.

You're a pussy "emit/admit" it, you're taking up a long line, hanging w/ the wrong kind//
It's A.M., after I 'beat this clock' you can 'PM me' if you wanna 'make up for the loss Time'//

Sick closer. Liked how the wordplay blended with the punch and delivered properly. Good verse R.E.


Crunch's verse
When my punchlines STRIKE-HIm,-THIS-HOE'S-DEAD, myspace? no one seen ur face, so i guess ur HIDING-WITH-NO-BREAD..
so call urself SLEEPY HOLLOW cause ur a guy RIDING-WITH-NO-HEAD...

Couldve played with words more to open it out, punchline is ehhh... Just not delivering the way I'm sure you wanted it to.

i'm like spaniards once my blade TOUCH-HIM,THIS-BULL'S-OVER...you fake hoe, u take loads like u FUCKIN-WITh-BULLDOZERS.

Ahaha, this one was pretty funny. Nice wordplay and almost two punches at once. Nice bar here.

i'm TUCKiN-THE-TOOL-CLOSER, cause everyday i RIDE-WITH-THE-PISTOL??SURREEE..
i fucked ur moms in her office table, SHe was LIKING-MY-DICK-IN-HER...
she got layed, papers all around that bitch..LIKE THE GUY-IN-YA-SIGNATURE..

No. Mom shit is way outdated and should be cast on that show for MTV. You're not really directing a diss at him when you speak of girlfriends, moms, and such when the line is delivered like this. Doesn't hit at all for me.

this HOE's-A-DISGRACE, i'ma SOULJA-WITH-K's, u'll win if i no show'd like HOES in MOST-OF-YA-DATES..

This one is more like it when trying to put him down, but seems like such a short bar compared to the rest of your verse, which fucks with your flow when read as a whole. Punch is aight though.

i'm GOIN-FO-DOUGH, your face u aint SHOWiN-SO-GO...ur life's over, ur like a dead snail u aint ROLLIN-NO-MO..

Again, short bar but now its not as noticable. This punch is lame though, and you forced multi's like a muthafucker IMO.

when i heard i was battlin tom, i knew it was easy to BEAT HIM IN MY PLACE..
cause my guns make tom dissapear just like DELETING-HIM-of MYSPACE..

Okay, this isnt doing it for me either. You couldve flipped the punch so much better, and guns making people do shit on the net is just haha NOT realistic. You have some great concepts and know what you are doing I think, just need to work more at coming correct and complete.

Vote R.E.

[Omega Bill]

Crunch, like I said in the battle with Jack, you gotta get better setups and punches for battle verses.

"
i'm like spaniards once my blade TOUCH-HIM,THIS-BULL'S-OVER...you fake hoe, u take loads like u FUCKIN-WITh-BULLDOZERS.
i'm TUCKiN-THE-TOOL-CLOSER, cause everyday i RIDE-WITH-THE-PISTOL??SURREEE.."

What is that? Is that a bar? It's a 5 bar battle and you wasted an entire one on absolutely nothing.

The Myspace bar had a lot of potential but it was delivered poorly and needed to be re-worded, again, with a better set-up and punch so that it could hit harder.

I did like the snail line though. Not a hard hitting punch, but it's a cool line.

Rugged:
Got an hour, that's cool, ya' just a 'kid in the hall', watch me 'out class' you//
After I 'handle this beef' only place you'll see ''crunch raps'' sell is in fast food//

Nice wordplay on this one.

Look at ya avy, we'll see how far that photo takes you, betta hope Eros don't rape you//
Pokomon? damn dog, I didn't even have to "peek-at-chu" to over "rate you/Raichu"//

Great wordplay but didn't like the punch. Why would you over-rate him? Kind of a silly punch, but a nice play on words for sure.

Vote: Rugged. Nice flow, wordplay, and punches.


Winner: Rugged. Closed and Updated.