Alpha Bill vs Kau The Lion

[Omega Bill]

5 bars

House rules

Verses due 24 hours after check-ins. This is my check.

[Kau the Lion]

Checkity check.

[Omega Bill]

Gettin ya name out, you know this was a good way towards uppin ya activity
But Ill lay this lame out, cuz only time Lion gets noticed is in fuckin captivity!

Your words they bore, take your throne and swipe it from out under your feet
Make this lion an herbivore when Im done the way he no longer hungers for beef!

Murder you and your 'cats' quick, Im cold, leave you dyin hit by a snow tide
N its some sick shit to spit the way I can show this Lion that he as no "pride"!

Tear you apart, Im fryin men, dont wrestle, I slam box, havin u peacful and tryin zen
No "Hart", u "Owen" me a win, like Ken Shamrock the way I destroy this "Lions Den" *

This is a lyrical slaughtering, it aint funny how I torment and mamed his laughter
Kill this bastard, and leave him fucking dormant like the volcano hes named after! **

* - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nqZJVfd8Ilo
** http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rano_Kau

[Kau the Lion]

Alpha Bill's skills are laughable, not even half ill, scrap ya shit verse
Your raps are worthless, Lion's paws on your back like African turf.

Watch Kau pass this bill, soon, like a congressional movement.
And I'd choke you half to death but your shirt beat me to it.

My Hands will smack around this wack clown, make him battle for life.
Have Bill easily screaming this evening and it ain't "Saturday Night"

Yo, don't quit your day job, and that wasn't to tarnish your rep, son.
But find another profession. Bill wouldn't get paid going into collections.

And don't pardon the lesson, Alpha, you're sparring the best, son.
When I spark the Wesson I'm the last man standing like Charlton Heston.


Mr. Bill is from Saturday Night Live know for his screaming death scenes
Charlton Heston starred in the movie Omega Man as the "last man on Earth"

[Quix]

Gettin ya name out, you know this was a good way towards uppin ya activity
But Ill lay this lame out, cuz only time Lion gets noticed is in fuckin captivity!

multies didn't match ... not a bad bar tho. decent punch 2/5


Your words they bore, take your throne and swipe it from out under your feet
Make this lion an herbivore when Im done the way he no longer hungers for beef!

hmm, Pretty nice not very direct or aggresive tho 3/5

Murder you and your 'cats' quick, Im cold, leave you dyin hit by a snow tide
N its some sick shit to spit the way I can show this Lion that he as no "pride"!

No ... Not very good at all ... lack a punch, personal, anything 1/5


Tear you apart, Im fry
in men, dont wrestle, I slam box, havin u peacful and tryin zen
No "Hart", u "Owen" me a win, like Ken Shamrock the way I destroy this "Lions Den" *

stretched ... choppy flow ... decent punch 2.5/5

This is a lyrical slaughtering, it aint funny how I torment and mamed his laughter
Kill this bastard, and leave him fucking dormant like the volcano hes named after! **

multies off again ... decent punch again ... 2.5/5


11/25



Alpha Bill's skills are laughable, not even half ill, scrap ya shit verse
Your raps are worthless, Lion's paws on your back like African turf.

meh, not feeling it .. weak opener 1/5


Watch Kau pass this bill, soon, like a congressional movement.
And I'd choke you half to death but your shirt beat me to it.

lol made me laugh .. but your multies were off here 2.5/5

My Hands will smack around this wack clown, make him battle for life.
Have Bill easily screaming this evening and it ain't "Saturday Night"

haha, flowed nice ... humerous ... 3/5

Yo, don't quit your day job, and that wasn't to tarnish your rep, son.
But find another profession. Bill wouldn't get paid going into collections.

weak ... 2/5

And don't pardon the lesson, Alpha, you're sparring the best, son.
When I spark the Wesson I'm the last man standing like Charlton Heston.

Nice .. .3.5/5

Mr. Bill is from Saturday Night Live know for his screaming death scenes
Charlton Heston starred in the movie Omega Man as the "last man on Earth"


12/25


Vote Kau ... Bill i've seen much better from you hommie!! work out those punches and you'll be fine



The Lion gets my vote

[Fuck u up!]

Bill...

Gettin ya name out, you know this was a good way towards uppin ya activity
But Ill lay this lame out, cuz only time Lion gets noticed is in fuckin captivity!
kool set up n' idea.. Impact not as high
No "Hart", u "Owen" me a win, like Ken Shamrock the way I destroy this "Lions Den" *
Good Idea (had to google it I don't take in MMA really) But the way you worded it didn't hold it up fully

Kill this bastard, and leave him fucking dormant like the volcano hes named after!
again kool idea, but its like you didn't even think twice to flip it for more damage

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Lion...

Watch Kau pass this bill, soon, like a congressional movement.
And I'd choke you half to death but your shirt beat me to it.
1st half needs a word or two flipped/moved (my opinion) 2nd was kool haha the visual did

Have Bill easily screaming this evening and it ain't "Saturday Night"
I got it, kool attempt, but the outcome = no
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ideas..K
Personals..Tie
Punches..B

Overall.. Mmmmmm This was close, bill had more attempts which added up, Lion had mmm some attempts, the T shirt line held some weight though.. But in the End my votes on Alpha Bill cause he had a more Direct verse with his lines.

[IntrinsicCadence]

Flow: Kau
Personals: Bill
Punchlines: Kau
Creativity: Tie

Overall--- Kau, just barely

I almost wanted to vote for Bill, as his punches were packed more personal, but Kau's t-shirt jab and not getting paid working in collections jab both were creative and funny, which for me just tipped the scale in his direction. I'd agree with rugged's comment about Kau's punches being a little too general at times and could have been used in a battle against anyone. But I also felt the music behind Kau's delivery better, when I read Kau's, in my head it sounded like a vocal battle piece, but to me Bill's didn't have the same level of music feel to it.

[Ambiguous Realm]

Main categories-

Punches: Kau
Personals: Kau
Flow/Rhymescheme: Bill

Sub-
Wordplay: Bill
Nameplay: Kau

Vote: Kau


both have equal but different creativity, good battle overall..Bill had lots of name referencing, but nameplay doesn't out count reality-based punches as personals imo.
Kau needs to keep a steady flow as well, bill had some jagged edges too but kau took the cake for crappy flow up until that weak wesson line

Favorite bar from Bill-

Tear you apart, Im fryin men, dont wrestle, I slam box, havin u peacful and tryin zen
No "Hart", u "Owen" me a win, like Ken Shamrock the way I destroy this "Lions Den" *


Favorite bar from Kau-

Watch Kau pass this bill, soon, like a congressional movement.
And I'd choke you half to death but your shirt beat me to it.

[Kau the Lion]

No offense to Fuck u up! but 21 is too small a post count to be voting here so I'm throwing that one out. To be fair, Intrinsic Cadence might have been below fifty posts when he voted as well so I'll let you decide whether or not to count his vote.

Upping for more votes.

[Omega Bill]

No offense to Fuck u up! but 21 is too small a post count to be voting here so I'm throwing that one out. To be fair, Intrinsic Cadence might have been below fifty posts when he voted as well so I'll let you decide whether or not to count his vote.

Upping for more votes.

Well, both have been voting, dropping writtens, and Fuck u Up has been battling also, so neither will be discounted.

This has been open far too long as it is.

Winner: Kau The Lion on a 3-2 count.

Good battle, bud.

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