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tha earth iz like a marble
dont take it for granite
be spontanious
u already live on the plan'it
Aja! I See What U Did There
ala'be iz all eye see
after eye adjust the PH and silence the T (al(-ph)abe(-t)
tha word alpha'bet
haz nuthin to do with A to Z
Hmmmm U A Weird Dude

Ok I Couldve Quoted More But I Dunno Its Early And I Was Fucked Up Yesterday... So I Might Be A Lil Dazed.. But There Was Some Serious Word Play In There. I Dunno How Good It Was Tho.. i Will Have To Wait For A Second Opinion Out Of A Vet... But This Looks More Like A Distilled Concept In My Eyes.. Very Different Drop From What Ive Seen In A While.. Nice To See A Different Approach Here... Keep Writing... Develop Ur Structure A Little Bit More
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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werd up god lukin on the feed
eyem a philosopher head'n for hip hop
def goda loda structure werk to do
write on Flip
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