Jack Da Rippa -vs- Kau the Lion

[JDR]

5 Bars
House Rules
Due 24 After tha Check...

You know tha deal..

[Kau the Lion]

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-- Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:38 pm --

We know Jacks spits ain't jack shit; is this jack off is trying to jack me?
Is he jacked up on Jack Daniels? I'll put his brains in his hands like Jackie. (Oh!)

Now that I got the jack jokes out of me...

I'll rip Jack a new one or a half dozen. We know you don't swing one way, dude.
And now you can be fucked six ways to Sunday like when you were in Sunday school.

In an unkind gesture I'll be the gunfire provider to leave this dumb guy's chest hurt.
This young child molester's not the Punchline King, he's the Punchline jester.

I xzibit skills that will pimp slap you off your seatless bicycle ride.
Yo, dawg! I heard you be liking them guys so you put a penis inside your behind.

So you can get fucked while you're fucked...

I was born an bred to kill with scores of red. Leave him more than dead.
And for the record, when the shit hits the fan your verse will get torn to shreds.

[JDR]

Aiigh...Look

Don't even lift a pen to write raps, I'm so nice that, you should be wishin' this site crashed
Coz tha bitch in him can't fight Jack, when everyone knows I stay above this K Man, like Caribian flight paths

I keep a fist to kidd till spines crack, you gettin' smacked wit tha heat coz its a fact I'm a beast
Heard you bustin' gats on the street, but the only time I noticed a K-nine, it was ATTACHED to a LEASH

This nigga collapsed in defeat, clapped in ya sleep, you gettin' left in a mood
That's prolly the best you can do, coz I aint interested in Lion unless I was pressed for the truth

Ya best get abused coz death is assumed, this nigga suckin', ya simply shit
So why you frontin wit tha scripts you pick, coz the last time I seen K Fed, he was fuckin' that Britney chick

It's nothin' to rip this bitch, make you sick of this, I've been told he's another Catch
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/crunc ... 17896.html
You so pathetic that I'd rather waste my bar and tell niggas to go vote in my other match!

Fugetit..

[FlipSide]

LMAO......Ok I Got To Give The Punches To Jack...Wayyy Nicer With The Play There... Flow Jack..... Personals .....I Dunno...That Last Line Was Kinda Personal The Way He Lacked On Purpose And Still Made Me Laugh With It.. Jus A Quick Vote...TOuched The Cats... By The Way Kau.. I Kinda Didnt Like The Way U Used Up All Ur Jacks On That First Bar...Seemed to Lack Some Creativity There Dude.. but U Had a couple descent bars...jus seems jack went harder with the k9 and the k fed and spread them around nicely... vote jack

[MesaR]

Personals/nameplay - Jack
Punchlines - Jack
Flow - Lion

Jack the ripper just came alot harder with being more creative with his disses and name plays, you're flow was a little stretched but the multis helped you out in that department, lion i wasn't all that impressed you had a few clever lines but not enough.

[Kuhlerblynd]

Im gonna have to say that Jack took this in all aspects, but Kau did have some nice concepts. Gotta work on that delivery, man. Thats the only thing lacking to get you to another level. Then you'll need to get at the wordplay. Nice battle.

[AntiMaTTer]

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-- Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:38 pm --

We know Jacks spits ain't jack shit; is this jack off is trying to jack me?
Is he jacked up on Jack Daniels? I'll put his brains in his hands like Jackie. (Oh!)

i liked the rhyme jacke me/jackie, it flowd decent but the wording was off in first sentence
Now that I got the jack jokes out of me...

I'll rip Jack a new one or a half dozen. We know you don't swing one way, dude.
And now you can be fucked six ways to Sunday like when you were in Sunday school.
not bad, pretty clever

In an unkind gesture I'll be the gunfire provider to leave this dumb guy's chest hurt.
This young child molester's not the Punchline King, he's the Punchline jester.
my fav lines so far, i was feelin this

I xzibit skills that will pimp slap you off your seatless bicycle ride.
Yo, dawg! I heard you be liking them guys so you put a penis inside your behind.

So you can get fucked while you're fucked...

I was born an bred to kill with scores of red. Leave him more than dead.
And for the record, when the shit hits the fan your verse will get torn to shreds.
the rest was kinda filler and the last line wasnt a bad closer but it wasnt really hittin hard

aite

-- Thu Sep 02, 2010 8:11 am --

Aiigh...Look

Don't even lift a pen to write raps, I'm so nice that, you should be wishin' this site crashed
Coz tha bitch in him can't fight Jack, when everyone knows I stay above this K Man, like Caribian flight paths
lol nice opener, some word play/punchs and a good name flip

I keep a fist to kidd till spines crack, you gettin' smacked wit tha heat coz its a fact I'm a beast
Heard you bustin' gats on the street, but the only time I noticed a K-nine, it was ATTACHED to a LEASH
this my style right here, like the rhyme scheme and nice flip again

This nigga collapsed in defeat, clapped in ya sleep, you gettin' left in a mood
That's prolly the best you can do, coz I aint interested in Lion unless I was pressed for the truth
eh prolly the weakest so far but an aite flip, i think if word'd lil different could have made the difference

Ya best get abused coz death is assumed, this nigga suckin', ya simply shit
So why you frontin wit tha scripts you pick, coz the last time I seen K Fed, he was fuckin' that Britney chick
Lol? is that a diss? id fuck that britney chick

It's nothin' to rip this bitch, make you sick of this, I've been told he's another Catch
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/crunc ... 17896.html
You so pathetic that I'd rather waste my bar and tell niggas to go vote in my other match!
i actually liked this closer, pretty nice

Fugetit..

flow-kau
punchs-jack
word ply-tie
multis-tie

so it was bout tied but to me punchs wins battles, so Jack gets it.

that was a pretty sick battle tho, props