Rugged Eros Vs. Orfadox

[Orfadox]

Checking In

[Orfadox]

Hmmm I Got a New Stalker....Shit Man This Dudes Got Way Too Much Time On His Hands
If You Took As Much Time With Ya Verse As You Did With The Research You'd Be Half Good Man
Looks Like His Verse Is Written In Crayon,His Punches Are So Far Off They Wouldnt Hit With NOS On
It Took Ya How Long To Find My Picture Dude?? Theres Plenty Of Porn Sites Ya Can Go On
Man You Must Be Living In A Fantasy World If You Think You Gunna Win Should Just Call You Dumbledore
Rap King Haha After This They'll Call You Elvis Cause You Wont Be Around Nomore
Fuck Watching How The West Do It Man Sit Back Read This And Watch How The Best Do It
Now Listen Dick Im No Butcher But I Spent A Little Time Learning From Lorena Bobbin's
I Got Two More Lines To Leave You Dead And Buried Shouldnt Be To Hard When Im Battling Bricktop
Should Just Change My Name To Serial Killer Cuase Im Gunna Snap Ya Neck Cackle And Take A Shot At Ya Pops

[IntrinsicCadence]

This one goes to Rugged...

All the research put into it is impressive, but at the same time, in my mind, with so much research it completely destroyed any feel of spontaneity. It made it feel like each line took an hour to research and write, which to me isn't quite the spirit of the battle. Nonetheless, I still send my vote in all categories to Rugged. If this was a live battle, it could be totally different, but it wasn't a live battle...
Rugged's got better rhythm and flow and real direct and personal punches. Orfadox seems to be defending himself too much, and the only personal jabs are in relation to defending himself. I'm also not feelin' too much rhythm in Orfadox's piece, so honestly I got a little bored as I was reading through it.

[Orfadox]

Aiight 1-0 Rugged

[AntiMaTTer]

VOTE=RUGGED

Ill explain after work, but his personals/punchs were hitting on point.


[RESERVED]

[Kau the Lion]

Multies: Rugged
Flow: Tie
Personals: Rugged
Punches: Rugged

Vote goes to Rugged easy. Orf had no multies and his personals were pretty weak. The explanations in Ruggs verse took away from the punches a bit but for the most part you could get it with out following his links.

+1 Rugged

[AntiMaTTer]

Consider this the second Revolution...

Fuck ya flag, this punks a fag, watch me target a few puns then he's dead//
This girl's scared of spiders, man!... well then consider me Carnage when it comes to the web//
Nice shit, liked the multi setup and the punch was solid. Good pun as well.

^^http://www.bebo.com/c/profile?MemberId=4787587371

Go play some Cricket kid, eat some fish n' chips & watch how the west do it//
British bitch is a little snitch, know how? his label is called 'KonFess Musik'//
Nice flip on his shit here, that was pretty clever
^^bebo.com - Profile from OrfadoX <KonFess_MusiK>

I see you all over the net, but it'd be wise to not set any personal goals//
Cuz the last english guy that tried 'getting in the way' ended up gettin' burnt in the zone//
This was ok, not as good as the others you had

Fuck this Robert Green ya off the team, I'm going past you, so what's the catch?//
I'll put chrome in ya mouth n' give ya a crooked "bullet-tooth" like I'm Doug from Snatch//
Nice setup and pretty good punch, wasnt my favorite


Ya looking at "The Head", but lets look at your head, ya top's completely gone//
Can't believe your 21 & already bald, so no wonder dox got's a beanie on//
good personal flip, nice multi usage as well

^^ http://www.muzicforums.com/lounge/12237 ... rself.html (said he wishes he had hair)


Doug "The Head" is from the movie Snatch. Bullet Tooth is the name of the hit man he hires to find the diamond.

over all that was a pretty sick verse IMO. Good flips and personals and multi/punchs worked nicely.

-- Thu Sep 09, 2010 10:16 am --

Hmmm I Got a New Stalker....Shit Man This Dudes Got Way Too Much Time On His Hands
If You Took As Much Time With Ya Verse As You Did With The Research You'd Be Half Good Man
Looks Like His Verse Is Written In Crayon,His Punches Are So Far Off They Wouldnt Hit With NOS On
It Took Ya How Long To Find My Picture Dude?? Theres Plenty Of Porn Sites Ya Can Go On
All the lines up to the last line here was filler. The punch kinda took way to look to hit, and those other lines i wouldnt consider punchs

Man You Must Be Living In A Fantasy World If You Think You Gunna Win Should Just Call You Dumbledore
Rap King Haha After This They'll Call You Elvis Cause You Wont Be Around Nomore
yea this line makes me "Haha". wtf

Fuck Watching How The West Do It Man Sit Back Read This And Watch How The Best Do It
Now Listen Dick Im No Butcher But I Spent A Little Time Learning From Lorena Bobbin's
wtf... you went around chopin dicks off with a chick? idk sounds far fetched

I Got Two More Lines To Leave You Dead And Buried Shouldnt Be To Hard When Im Battling Bricktop
Should Just Change My Name To Serial Killer Cuase Im Gunna Snap Ya Neck Cackle And Take A Shot At Ya Pops
yea, filler

i mean i dont what to do you dude, you have the right concept, but no element to it. its just there, kinda bland. but stay at it dude and elevate

VOTE=Rugg

[Ambiguous Realm]

its already 3-0 so rugged won with a k.o., just to add.. i also thought rugged won this with a landslide, orf just needs some more practice,
u dont gotta count this as a vote so dont worry, still 3-0 though rugged wins


-battle closed & records updated-