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lyrical1
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Treacherous testaments lessens investments in faith based lessons wit fake-laced precedence/ Word artistry housing mistakes made by impressionists/ tryin to impress us wit impressions of perfectionists/
Restless is deception while detectin nations stressing since their patience is regressing into sectors where aggression voids succession of acceptance, so as anger grows progressive, opens hatred, closes questions, no relations are respected/
Clouded judgment reigns at summits where moral storms will cometh to the forefront of misdirection, towards the depths that many plummet/ only dozens saved, while millions say they’ve suffered/ the pain they hate, but love, and now can’t get enough of/
Spirits shake tumultuous as prophecies are uttered/
Souls sold for fame, cash back policies soon discovered/
A shameful state of dignity no polishing will buffer/
Worldly prowess and riches to The Father will mean nothing/
Dismiss expired dialect, rotten plots desired yet my recipes feed foundations, the belly of an iron chef/ is never satiated, steadily graving higher tests/ where knowledge ranks supreme atop pyramids where empires rest/
Reception beyond documented human capability/
Wit sight, optic realness uses brains to cage what’s mentally/
Visualizing the route, no rules to regulate contingencies/
When the world has limits, the spirit moves wit divinity/
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succession of acceptance, so as anger grows progressive, opens hatred, closes questions, no relations are respected/
dope
Souls sold for fame, cash back policies soon discovered/
A shameful state of dignity no polishing will buffer/
nice

overall pretty cool.
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Damn....this mu'fucker went in...the vocab is nicely used
the structure of this was kinda outta wack but oh well
I'm digging it man you show that your on some lyrical shit
I like that, I used to be like that but eh, either way
you got some dope lines in here bruh

Clouded judgment reigns at summits where moral storms will cometh to the forefront of misdirection, towards the depths that many plummet/ only dozens saved, while millions say they’ve suffered/ the pain they hate, but love, and now can’t get enough of/

that alone really took this piece to higher levels
I like the way your rhymes just flow through fluently
keep writing tho' man, I'll be checking for you when I feed
nice drop...peace
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