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Eyes, Caramel complected or possibly Hazelnut
Forearm that came appraised with love
whole style consistent even when changing up
claim to never care but that ain't sayin' enough
cuz I sense a different outlook if pain is love
deal with the problems, and ascend the facts
mind in a different state, still ya better half
shares a brighter side when you tend to laugh
somewhat goofy but that's what get's me
cuz no one else got me.....except me
so when I ask for somethin' simple as a moment
you allow me a second, even consolement
so to say you don't care, is really amazing
family is your motive, and you prolly won't change it
maybe...but that depends on if its worth it
you dream of things that could be picture perfect
even if it's not you hope atleast some of it's workin'
for the better, ever feel underweather it's ok
I sense a stronger prescence and you don't show it
even when tears overflowin' it's possibly emotion
heartbroken or somethin' else, I don't get it?
or witness...your closed in at times, your senses
tend to let off a "I could do it myself" persona
a gift of honor, play half witted but maybe u smarter
and all the thoughts you give off seem..awkward
but it's not like you the only one thinkin' odd things
then again who knows I'm just stating what comes to mind
but the only thing I really wanted to say...is gon' be underlined


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Post by Kau the Lion »

Excellent flow and good emotion in this piece. Nice multies here and there.
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claim to never care but that ain't sayin' enough
cuz I sense a different outlook if pain is love
Jus like this... had to quote it
so when I ask for somethin' simple as a moment
you allow me a second, even consolement
shits hot too
tend to let off a "I could do it myself" persona
a gift of honor, play half witted but maybe u smarter
and all the thoughts you give off seem..awkward
good flow here as i say it..

typical of ur drops bro...good read...lil love joint here lulz
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Smooth playa, clever beginnin
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so when I ask for somethin' simple as a moment
you allow me a second, even consolement
so to say you don't care, is really amazing
family is your motive, and you prolly won't change it
maybe...but that depends on if its worth it
you dream of things that could be picture perfect
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0_0 you guys are crazy lulz
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