So I'm thinking about making this the intro track to my upcoming CD. Most of the tracks will have rappin' accompanying the instrumental, but for this particular one I was thinking about just making it an instrumental track and then perhaps I'll talk a bit on it just to introduce the CD and such. What ya think of it?
Also, do you think I should include the starting poem or not (it's actually part of an Edgar Allen Poe poem). It's not my voice, it's just some clip I found.
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Re: Loungin' (intro)
i'd keep the vocals, like the vibe of it, piano keys remind me a charlie brown christmas lol, drums could use a bit more variety vibe needs a minimal pattern but i think some additional percussion and added could add flavor, other than that good shit
i wouldn't use this as an intro beat though, i dunno maybe its just me but i think a beat should only be used for an intro if its some really busy or oddly formatted piece that really has no room for rapping, cuz i always hate listening to an album and hearing a dope vocal ready intro or skit beat especially when its better than some of the beats on the album
i wouldn't use this as an intro beat though, i dunno maybe its just me but i think a beat should only be used for an intro if its some really busy or oddly formatted piece that really has no room for rapping, cuz i always hate listening to an album and hearing a dope vocal ready intro or skit beat especially when its better than some of the beats on the album
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You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
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