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If his multies matched he might be dope but in spite he hopes then writes and chokes
It's a fact he's a faggot with all the pipe he smokes I wont resort to the whitey jokes
"White America, I could be one of your kids, white America, little Eric looks just like this,
White America, Erica loves my shit, I go to TRL, look how many hugs I get, white America, I
Could be one of your kids, white America, little Eric looks just like this, white America, Erica
Loves my shit, I go to TRL, look how many hugs I get..."
tried to listen to your audios but I hear nothing but pops and hisses so stop the bitchin
Never claim that you rock shows just because you sing while you mop the kitchen
Dammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!LOL... Thats An Ill Personal Bro.... Nice Drop...::::Waiting For Catch To Drop Another Now::::
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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t's kind of sad how half of Em's songs are aimed at you so we'll say it's true
Sit down and listen Stan cuz I'll more than tame a shrew this lame is screwed
You're not a problem when you can't even structure a rhyme scheme
How can you structure a punch while you're asking "What's that line mean!?"
lol
solid response
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You're not a problem when you can't even structure a rhyme scheme
How can you structure a punch while you're asking "What's that line mean!?
best line imo
I'll end it short though because I already broke this cracker and smoked the herb
I don't needa choke a rapper I'll just scope this bird and murder him with spoken word
these were probably the best multi usage in the script. Not exactly sure if I "Catch" what youre aiming at, but it flowed well and the structure is clean. No real complaints. pretty nice over all.
but word man you went in again
I wonder where Catch is at tho?
I think you ran him off dawg..lulz
either way this whole piece was on point
took that Em chorus to a different level
sting was on point with your lines tho'
keep it up maaaan
There's no need to take shots at this geek while his plot's gettin weak
There's no stopping the streak he's still waiting for albums to drop when they leak
LMAO
If his multies matched he might be dope but in spite he hopes then writes and chokes
It's a fact he's a faggot with all the pipe he smokes I wont resort to the whitey jokes
going in
He's just a wannabe Marshall if that matters I don't think it is but if he's Mathers
What's all this shit he splatters? I think you missed the matter while you sit and chatter
lol humor with a swing,
This faggot even shaved his head while trying to mimic Eminems flow
But, I'm "Cleaning Out My Closet" while you're "White America" this aint no Eminem Show
lol I see where you was going
"White America, I could be one of your kids, white America, little Eric looks just like this,
White America, Erica loves my shit, I go to TRL, look how many hugs I get, white America, I
Could be one of your kids, white America, little Eric looks just like this, white America, Erica
Loves my shit, I go to TRL, look how many hugs I get..."
^^ Lmao, got the eminem beat in my head now
It's kind of sad how half of Em's songs are aimed at you so we'll say it's true
Sit down and listen Stan cuz I'll more than tame a shrew this lame is screwed
LoL 'aimed at you'.
You're not a problem when you can't even structure a rhyme scheme
How can you structure a punch while you're asking "What's that line mean!?"
Nice
I tried to listen to your audios but I hear nothing but pops and hisses so stop the bitchin
Never claim that you rock shows just because you sing while you mop the kitchen
LOL you're a asshole,I Like the humor
I'll end it short though because I already broke this cracker and smoked the herb
I don't needa choke a rapper I'll just scope this bird and murder him with spoken word
Blam .. lol good finish.
I Liked this, it had hard punches, humor, good flow lol
I didn't like the Em hook, but thats just me, you strung the verses 2gether well.
