Anti <VS> Ambition *VOTE!*

[AntiMaTTer]

aite,

so lets try 14 lines, due... meh, im usually tight on schedule so just get it up when you can.

No flippin lines
Recycling etc.
No dick riding
3 votes KO
5 votes wins

uhm... hm guess i drop first since i asked for the callout.

Check in.

[Haz]

Check.

[AntiMaTTer]

good deal

*tips hat

let the rumble commence.

-- Fri Sep 03, 2010 11:23 am --

ok idk how you guys do shit on this site and its prolly cliche' but w/e here it goes

Also, the time/dates is off on the shoutbox for some reason on my shit?

Look, i aint HATING THIS WEAK KID, but he aint TAKING THIS BEATING...
How the FUCK you "AMBITION" when your record aint BREAKING IT EVEN!?...
Im Relaying the Meaning, rap battle? yea i Punchlines in ya Face...
Just one Rhyme And You Break, I Rap circles "round '@'mbition" like im Typing His Name!...
Let me Enlighten ya Day, "Ambitions" also defined as a Hunger for Succession...
Its no Wonder Youre No Threat Bitch! cuz ya Appetite is Acting Like you're FUCKING ANOREXIC!...
Plus you're not Under the Vet List, cuz when you argued with Complexity...
You str8 bounced like a bitch and took off of the Net to Leave!..

$.@MB!T!0N.$ - Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:38 am
i'm out though, take it easy

Swearing that you're tight? youre just Embarassin to Fight, keep FRONTING YOU DUMB BITCH...
You cant STOMACH JUST ONE HIT, only thing youre "AMBITIOUS" at is DUCKING FROM RUGGED!..10

Rugged Eros - Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:48 am
He ducked me, so until he battles me I'll say no

Ill Tare Em with Razors, and you aint saying Shit when im FISTING YA FACE IN...
Thanks for postin ya pic, and I Swear i Aint Racist but i cant Tell if this Bitch is a SPIC OR A HAITIAN?!...
Why am i even DISSIN THIS LAME KID, my SCRIPTURES ABUSE THIS HO!...
And you already have ya "Arms Crossed" cuz you "PICTURED" YOUR FUNERAL!!!....
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post- ... ck%20nasty

[Haz]

You Ant Money, For Bank Bread I'm Known To Spank Heads
Just a Rookie Why Would ANN Tie Matter With Miss Frank Dead???

So Many ways ta Blaze The Beta Posing a Threat Like El-Kada
Cause I Haven't Seen Tie Land a Swing Shipping Playgrounds From ASIA

Theres No value under your shit Structure If you Had Gold Pipes
u just ain't illest Material.. Do a U.E. Makes sense thats ya Old Site

Facing Me .. He's Unconfident Using that How Word Like Chasing Stern
Like Smithers He'll Be Taking Burns Have This New Comer In a Bag Like Donating Sperm

All That Gossip Chatter Is Wack, You & Scott Is Known 4 Flattering Sac's
U Ain't The Truth just James is Loose No Figure a speech but 'Matter' Of Fact!

'Why So Serious'?? Cause I Can't Give The Joke a Chance He Loves Garbage Like Broke Romance..
I'm Not "Trying To Murk" so When I Say Ty in the Dirt Ain't Reffering to the Growth of Plants

He ain't a diamond in the rough just a Pound Of Budd that'll get Burned
Or Drown in Mudd Till illest Kicks 'Anti Body Like a Protien Found In Blood

This Phoney Bin a Slave..Matters perishing getting all Boney in his cage
Fed Wrong Almost Dead Gone..ANTI?? Just Cause It Gets Lonely In Ya Grave ..

[JDR]

Punches - Ambition
Multies - Anti
Flow - Ambition
Creativity - Tie
Personals - Anti

Anti
Thought your verse was decent. I liked how you used a combination of punches & personals to hit Amb and thought you structured your verse well with multies.

Ambition
This is probably the best battle verse that I've read from you. I thought you really stepped it up with wordplay and the punches was nice.

Vote - Ambition
Anti did well but Ambition pretty much killed it in the opening bars. I usually notice a drop off from Ambitions battle verses in recent battles but I thought he was pretty consistant and hard hitting throughout the whole thing

1/out.

[Ambiguous Realm]

not sure what the categories are...

Punches - Anti
Personals - Anti
Flow/Rhymescheme - Ambition
Creativity - Ambition
Everything else - Anti

Overall - AntiMatter


Everything else includes originality, consistency, structure, word choice,intro, outro, i'm also including the negatives such as fillers and forced multis, bad connections ect. ect.

haz was more creative and original but held no real impact..a lot of bad word choices made as well which hurt the structure, anti was a little more consistent n definitely more personal, not as creative but was overall solid... this was a decent battle, however sadly i was expecting more from both of you

[IntrinsicCadence]

Personals: Anti
Punches: Tie
Flow: Anti
Creativity: Ambition

Overall: Anti

Both of these verses were well done, but I felt Anti's punches were more personal, and I felt the flow and rhythm in his more. For me, these are the most important elements in a text battle like this, so my vote goes to Anti. Ambition's verse was good and I really appreciated the his creativity and ability to word play, but it lacked the 'umph' needed in the flow and personal punch categories. I also found Ambition's verse impressive in the fact that he didn't drop a single 'fuck'. I find 'fuck' to be dropped in some battles to a point where because of it's frequency it looses the emphasis feeling that 'fuck' is meant to bring.

[Kuhlerblynd]

Punches- Anti
Personals- Anti
Flow- Ambition
Multi's- Anti
Creativness- Tie

Amb- You started this thing hard as fuck. That first line was real solid. You had some other good lines as well, but when I read that first one, I was like damn, son is coming hard on this one. It seemed like you lost steam except for a few spots after that.

Anti- Nice drop over-all. Did your homework with the personals, had a few nice nameflips, and just stayed really consistant throughout your verse, which in turn gets you the vote.

Vote- Anti


edited for misspelling and phrasing a little awkward. Should be fixed now though so nothing is misunderstood.

[AntiMaTTer]

4-1, more voting.