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AbZ The Beast
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battle verse VS the Chemist and scott james

Post by AbZ The Beast »

i guess they are not showing up..eh


Scot an Ch3m On alot of meth, get sc3nitic,only when they handle sores
scotty went 2 vegas got his fanny torn by a tranny whore!!

Abz planned for war!!combining Ch3micals that shatter an erase people
Scotty out this world? Only after i spear'em on seattles space needle

No way equal,we got mad energy,ya'll lack chemistry like empty test tubes
Six Shots leave Chems flesh strewn;James caught licking wounds as yer chest oozed

All my words conncet-dude,Blazing-passion-and-vengeance,james-DASH-to-the-extit
ONly time i feel your shit!!is when my blade-is-slashing-intestines

Attack ya defenses,Wont pick up the mic? so i'll make ya'll die in text
Your Every line is stretched,tried 2 rock a show,wasnt even close 2 a sesmic threat

fucked online like cyber sex,your teams dying, hey buddies? Keep trying!
Elite titans release violence punches land!what a sweet science!
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Re: battle verse VS the Chemist and scott james

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Scot an Ch3m On alot of meth, get sc3nitic,only when they handle sores
scotty went 2 vegas got his fanny torn by a tranny whore!!

first line was better then the second


Abz planned for war!!combining Ch3micals that shatter an erase people
Scotty out this world? Only after i spear'em on seattles space needle

lol Like this

No way equal,we got mad energy,ya'll lack chemistry like empty test tubes
Six Shots leave Chems flesh strewn;James caught licking wounds as yer chest oozed


good flow, & personal attack

All my words conncet-dude,Blazing-passion-and-vengeance,james-DASH-to-the-extit
ONly time i feel your shit!!is when my blade-is-slashing-intestines

lol Went in with this, I Like the flow to it

Attack ya defenses,Wont pick up the mic? so i'll make ya'll die in text
Your Every line is stretched,tried 2 rock a show,wasnt even close 2 a sesmic threat

Nice


fucked online like cyber sex,your teams dying, hey buddies? Keep trying!
Elite titans release violence punches land!what a sweet science!

Tough finisher.

Over all this was a good verse lol you had some Hay makers in this
also good flow etc, Keep dropping
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Post by Kau the Lion »

This was definitely the best battle verse I've seen from you. I think the space needle and the slashing intestines punches were the best. Good shit.
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thnx for the feed, i try every now and then
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Post by Quix »

YUP ... this was ILL mah dude!!

Wish they didn't no show us :)
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Post by QwarterZ »

This was a sick verse, some lines were meh to me
I don't know why? some of it did seem like you just braggin'
a little more self hype sprinkled here and there
but still it was a well rounded verse as far as punchs go
I'm diggin' it for the most part, I wonder how this battle would've turned out
nice drop nonetheless Abz, keep it up!
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Post by AntiMaTTer »

shit was dope, the test tube line was a good hit. il try and leave more later
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