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Breakout from the BarZ

Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Okay, so Im not sure how deep the feed will go for this verse in the actual battle thread that it's in, plus Im thinking its just me against both of my opponents since Qwartz never dropped his lines... Thus, Im putting this in here because I really want to know how everyone feels about the entire verse, and if anyone thats read my battle verses against Knowmad and Ambition thinks that this is an improvement as far as my battle writing goes... (Sorry for the long intro)


Ready, set, blast-ya-weapons, the two of you should have a reality show called !!Wack-Inceptions!!/
Kids this is class-in-session, as much as these fags shove their head up Plex's ass, Im wondering the spread of staff-infection//(1)

I'll harass-the-peasents since they asked-for-more, guarenteed pimp right here, slap-the-whores/
Don't ever come back-for-more, RE on the decend now, isnt it obvious when he calls himself a backwards-sore//(soar)(2)

My raps bring that cash-for-sure, this Evo dude is hollow-and-ugly/
Thinks he has a fan-base, you dont have any damn-taste, admit it - you've only ever been followed-by-monkeys//(sig)(3)

To tell-the-truth-son, in this tourney Qwartz and I will fail-to-lose-once/
While these two muthafuckers tryin to come together and still cant begin a REvolution//(4)


RE's talent is pure pollution, that Kazper shit isn't nice-to-me.. the design's-so-weak/
Do you always hide-de-feet?.. Kazper looks like a cracked out, balding, Jason-wannabe fan of I-C-P//(5)


say-hello-48th-street-main-character-kazper-vt16448.html?hilit=kazper#p137123

And Evo so wack, not even half-a-verse, my lil sister would snatch-ya-purse/
Crack ya voicebox and collapse-ya-words, blind that you're doomed from the jump, better off in a handicap match-with-Kurse//(6)
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Re: Breakout from the BarZ

Post by complexity »

Right. The problem is, this is slightly swaying.

I'm going to lock this topic until that battle is fully voted on.
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