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Pardon Me Intro[NEW MIXTAPE DROPPING IN JANUARY!]

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http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_5207879
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Re: Pardon Me Intro[NEW MIXTAPE DROPPING IN JANUARY!]

Post by - Mutual - »

yeah the beat goes hard on this shit damm, this was a good lil track some nice lines like the terrorist line, this was a good track for an intro nice little taster of what we can expect sounds pretty dope man lookin forward to this shit Venom keep it coming
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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thanks for the feed mutual.
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Post by Truup-Leef »

damn man...i like yo flow son...i know u don know me...but peep my shit fam...


http://soundclick.com/truupa


we need to collab
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i'll check you out man. thanks for listening.
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Post by HKX »

mixtape is gonna be sick dawg I've always enjoyed ur drops dis 1 was ill as well. Keep doin' ur thing bro.
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Post by Kau the Lion »

Good shit. Some nice wordplay in there. Looks like the mixtape is shaping up.
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i appreciate the feed back drop links if you need feed as well so i can get to them asap.
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Post by TheNobleOne »

yeah shits pretty cool man, not bad. ive known you for a minute, use to be on AIM chats and shit. i think you gave me a verse to hop on before but i never got a chance to finish it.
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Post by Dynamiq »

appreciate the feedback my man.
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8-0-8
Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
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