Little Mixup (Outta My System) - Young Frankenstein

[Young Frankenstein]

Yo illest,
Its a piece i done quickly,
I know it's not the dopest -
Im not to confident recording atm considering my writtens are kinda sloppy and i dont have no proper recording equipment.

Peep & Feel free to critisize, it's the only way development is going to begin.

[Deciple]

First off, welcome to illest man, Im Deciple, if you looking for good criticism for your skills then u came to the right place, this place has helped me tons..

bout the track... IMO you should bring out something original to the table.. You flow is there, little off here and there but most part kept to it, it seemed to me like you were reading the lyrics off the page... the way im getting this vibe is cuz you had very lil emotion and hardly any feelings in what u were saying.. it seemed like u didnt want to but u did it anyways.. presences is a key point in a good track, lyrics were good...

For your first track it aint back, but i would like to see something more original and also a full track...

Keep up the good work man and again welcome to illest