Jack Da Rippa -vs- AntiMatter (Anti Wins 4-0 K.O.)

[JDR]

7 Bars / 14 Lines
House Rules
Due Saturday

[AntiMaTTer]

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-- Sun Oct 03, 2010 7:27 am --

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Ill CONSTRUCT A FLOW with the force to CRUSH HIS BONES with DESTRUCTIVE BLOWS...
So, my fist get "JACK HAMMERED"... an it aint a CONSTRUCTION ZONE!!!...
PLUS...this DUMB FUCK CANT FLOW, acting like you TUCKIN A EAGLE all THUGISH AN EVIL...
This Dudes Weak it takes TWO WEEKS to drop a wack verse against RUGGED AND EVO?!....
Claim you Servin an MERKING SOME "BITCHES"? please...SURELY YOURE KIDDING...
History Lesson..its not Ironic that "Jack The Rippers" only "Well Known For" MURDERING WOMEN!!...
Im Assertive With Wining, you the most SHOOK BITCH IN THE LAND... so Why even BEAT AN EMBARRASS YOU...
Aint your "FOOT PRINTS IN THE SAND" he had a "TOUGH TIME" in the Tourny thats JESUS WHO CARRIED YOU!...
You Breathings A Miracle, "Undefeated"? ill give you Constant Beatens Im QUICK WITH A LEFT HAND...
Sick With The Text Man,This sites called "Illest Lyrics"..then why the Fuck does this BITCH HAVE THE TEXT CHAMP?
Fuck Peepin Ya Best Scripts, youll either Leave With Ya Neck Slit or Im BEATEN HIM SENSELESS...
Im A Beast in Ya Presence, now the sites "Questioning Jacks Quality" like DRINKING INSPECTIONS!!...
Jack aint EVEN A THREAT WHEN i start Boxing His Mouth until im Knocking His TONSILS OUT...
Fuck a Spatual Im fuckin FLIPPING JACKS and i dont even work at WAFFLE HOUSE!...14


if you dont get some of the lines dont vote. explained votes only.

[Kuhlerblynd]

According to the rules, Ill give Jack until 12:00pm EST of the USA time frame, so there isnt any confusion on the deadline. I wouldnt be firm about this but Jack set it up in callouts and set up the thread.

[JDR]

Welcome ya first L sonny...

YO.....

I know to admit is tough kidd, but you love Rip, coz I’m mentioned every time he flips his tongue in public
& He musta missed the subject , but I told ‘em NO BLE SHIT, & not the Bitch he Runs Wit

You can quit the grudge shit & let my nuts shift before clutched fist smoothly bomb next
I can tell ya truly got stress, Coz I keep MAT IN A line like booths at a Movie Complex

Soon as this newbie drops text, he cops death, until I got him n Nob in a family sickend feud
Nigga, these hands be rippin’ you, so no wonder “Mat Locked down like the Andy Griffith dude

Ya hands be split in two, exposin’ the bitch in you, so of course ya rhymes finished & sonned
Have ya brain shot like ya mind mimicks a gun, If this is a “Matter of Time”, then ya 5 Minutes is done.

Niggas know my lines equipped when they come, scars slow ya breathin as the bars expos ya beatins
It’s not hard, is it suppose to be kidd? But watch me Cool Ant on the streets like cars overheatin’

Ya Are so deceivin’, so peep the wins I’ve achieved n been & ya harsh logic stands lame
Bars clog this mans brain, while I got anti drug on the screen like a Narcotics campaign

So weither its Nob or Ant from all ya quotes n rants, only here to beef so the site needs these kids
You might believe hes pissed, coz the only ones Fightin’ Over Mat is Noble & the Spike TV Shit

you finished...

[complexity]

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-- Sun Oct 03, 2010 7:27 am --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/rugge ... 18345.html

Ill CONSTRUCT A FLOW with the force to CRUSH HIS BONES with DESTRUCTIVE BLOWS...
So, my fist get "JACK HAMMERED"... an it aint a CONSTRUCTION ZONE!!!...

[5/5] Scott James had this punch but never used it therefore you're the first one to use that concept.

PLUS...this DUMB FUCK CANT FLOW, acting like you TUCKIN A EAGLE all THUGISH AN EVIL...
This Dudes Weak it takes TWO WEEKS to drop a wack verse against RUGGED AND EVO?!....

[2/5] I like the personal direction but Rugged and Evo aren't really considered lightweights which makes the personal hit less.

Claim you Servin an MERKING SOME "BITCHES"? please...SURELY YOURE KIDDING...
History Lesson..its not Ironic that "Jack The Rippers" only "Well Known For" MURDERING WOMEN!!...

[4/5] Bang. Simple but effective.

Im Assertive With Wining, you the most SHOOK BITCH IN THE LAND... so Why even BEAT AN EMBARRASS YOU...
Aint your "FOOT PRINTS IN THE SAND" he had a "TOUGH TIME" in the Tourny thats JESUS WHO CARRIED YOU!...

[3/5] Good personal. Decent inners.

You Breathings A Miracle, "Undefeated"? ill give you Constant Beatens Im QUICK WITH A LEFT HAND...
Sick With The Text Man,This sites called "Illest Lyrics"..then why the Fuck does this BITCH HAVE THE TEXT CHAMP?

[3/5] Good personal but horrible wording with the punch.

Fuck Peepin Ya Best Scripts, youll either Leave With Ya Neck Slit or Im BEATEN HIM SENSELESS...
Im A Beast in Ya Presence, now the sites "Questioning Jacks Quality" like DRINKING INSPECTIONS!!...

[2/5] I've read so many different variations of that line, its becoming beyond redundant. Anyone can do it, its becoming the line that bad battlers use. [- a play off a Hitchen's quote]

Jack aint EVEN A THREAT WHEN i start Boxing His Mouth until im Knocking His TONSILS OUT...
Fuck a Spatual Im fuckin FLIPPING JACKS and i dont even work at WAFFLE HOUSE!...14

[4/5] Good finisher.

23/35

When I first read this verse I thought it was killer. A second look, it was pretty good, could have been better.


if you dont get some of the lines dont vote. explained votes only.

[If you don't get some lines then just kill yourself that was a very straight forward verse.]

"I know to admit is tough kidd, but you love Rip, coz I’m mentioned every time he flips his tongue in public
& He musta missed the subject , but I told ‘em NO BLE SHIT, & not the Bitch he Runs Wit

[3/5] Close to a good line but wasn't worded right.

You can quit the grudge shit & let my nuts shift before clutched fist smoothly bomb next
I can tell ya truly got stress, Coz I keep MAT IN A line like booths at a Movie Complex

[1/5] Creative. That's about it. One point for creativity. There is nothing else to that line. No personal. Also nobody calls him Mat which hurts this verse a lot, in my opinion. I'm biased against that type of nameplay.

Soon as this newbie drops text, he cops death, until I got him n Nob in a family sickend feud
Nigga, these hands be rippin’ you, so no wonder “Mat Locked down like the Andy Griffith dude

[2/5] 2 points for the reference and the wordplay.

Ya hands be split in two, exposin’ the bitch in you, so of course ya rhymes finished & sonned
Have ya brain shot like ya mind mimicks a gun, If this is a “Matter of Time”, then ya 5 Minutes is done.

[5/5] Great bar. Especially considering that he is a new guy on the site.

Niggas know my lines equipped when they come, scars slow ya breathin as the bars expos ya beatins
It’s not hard, is it suppose to be kidd? But watch me Cool Ant on the streets like cars overheatin’

[5/5] I was much more appreciative of this nameplay. You can actually imagine someone calling him Ant. When you said Mat. I had to think about it.

Ya Are so deceivin’, so peep the wins I’ve achieved n been & ya harsh logic stands lame
Bars clog this mans brain, while I got anti drug on the screen like a Narcotics campaign

[2/5] Very creative. The real meaning of the whole play isn't strong enough though.

So weither its Nob or Ant from all ya quotes n rants, only here to beef so the site needs these kids
You might believe hes pissed, coz the only ones Fightin’ Over Mat is Noble & the Spike TV Shit"

[3/5] I'm still not feeling the Mat line. I liked this one better than the former.

21/35

If you would have spent less time being clever and more time being personal, I think you would have rocked him because you did that good without even having any personals.

I had no idea what the scorecard was going to look like after I was done. I knew my initial impression was that Jack lost.

It was one of those situations where Jack was more creative, more original, smarter, but didn't get at his opponent. That's unfortunate because I think with a few more personals Jack would have had this battle pretty easily.

Very entertaining battle, by the way.

Overall: Anti-Matter

[Ambiguous Realm]

Anti -

Ill CONSTRUCT A FLOW with the force to CRUSH HIS BONES with DESTRUCTIVE BLOWS...
So, my fist get "JACK HAMMERED"... an it aint a CONSTRUCTION ZONE!!!...

perfect pun and great rhymescheme 5/5

PLUS...this DUMB FUCK CANT FLOW, acting like you TUCKIN A EAGLE all THUGISH AN EVIL...
This Dudes Weak it takes TWO WEEKS to drop a wack verse against RUGGED AND EVO?!....

the personal itself was a decent pun, follow-thru with the multi was iffy but the rest was smooth, 4/5

Claim you Servin an MERKING SOME "BITCHES"? please...SURELY YOURE KIDDING...
History Lesson..its not Ironic that "Jack The Rippers" only "Well Known For" MURDERING WOMEN!!...

nice personal, flow was done well and the pun hit correctly 5/5

Im Assertive With Wining, you the most SHOOK BITCH IN THE LAND... so Why even BEAT AN EMBARRASS YOU...
Aint your "FOOT PRINTS IN THE SAND" he had a "TOUGH TIME" in the Tourny thats JESUS WHO CARRIED YOU!...

nice follow up with the multi, rest of the rhymescheme was nice, good personal and punchline here as well 5/5

You Breathings A Miracle, "Undefeated"? ill give you Constant Beatens Im QUICK WITH A LEFT HAND...
Sick With The Text Man,This sites called "Illest Lyrics"..then why the Fuck does this BITCH HAVE THE TEXT CHAMP?

decent bar overall, personal wasn't too hard hitting though 3/5

Fuck Peepin Ya Best Scripts, youll either Leave With Ya Neck Slit or Im BEATEN HIM SENSELESS...
Im A Beast in Ya Presence, now the sites "Questioning Jacks Quality" like DRINKING INSPECTIONS!!...

nice fuckin bar, punchline was exceptional even though jack dan's a played concept this one was done, 5/5

Jack aint EVEN A THREAT WHEN i start Boxing His Mouth until im Knocking His TONSILS OUT...
Fuck a Spatual Im fuckin FLIPPING JACKS and i dont even work at WAFFLE HOUSE!...14

nice pun, thought the rhymeschemes could've been better though, 4/5

score: 31/35


Jack -

I know to admit is tough kidd, but you love Rip, coz I’m mentioned every time he flips his tongue in public
& He musta missed the subject , but I told ‘em NO BLE SHIT, & not the Bitch he Runs Wit

nice nameplay for the personal, decent boasting, flow was nice 5/5

You can quit the grudge shit & let my nuts shift before clutched fist smoothly bomb next
I can tell ya truly got stress, Coz I keep MAT IN A line like booths at a Movie Complex

multi followed up well, wasn't feelin the nameplay thought it was kinda forced in, decent rhymescheme though 3/5

Soon as this newbie drops text, he cops death, until I got him n Nob in a family sickend feud
Nigga, these hands be rippin’ you, so no wonder “Mat Locked down like the Andy Griffith dude

not feelin this at all, first bar without a filler atleast 2/5

Ya hands be split in two, exposin’ the bitch in you, so of course ya rhymes finished & sonned
Have ya brain shot like ya mind mimicks a gun, If this is a “Matter of Time”, then ya 5 Minutes is done.

the nameplay was koo, had a nice punch to it, rhymescheme was decent 5/5

Niggas know my lines equipped when they come, scars slow ya breathin as the bars expos ya beatins
It’s not hard, is it suppose to be kidd? But watch me Cool Ant on the streets like cars overheatin’

rhymescheme wasn't too great here, alright at best, the punchline and nameplay was nice though 4/5

Ya Are so deceivin’, so peep the wins I’ve achieved n been & ya harsh logic stands lame
Bars clog this mans brain, while I got anti drug on the screen like a Narcotics campaign

nice rhymescheme, punch was dope with some decent nameplay, 5/5

So weither its Nob or Ant from all ya quotes n rants, only here to beef so the site needs these kids
You might believe hes pissed, coz the only ones Fightin’ Over Mat is Noble & the Spike TV Shit

wasn't feelin the ufc pun, nice personal though, rhymescheme was alright, overall your last bar could've been a lot better 3/5

score: 27/35


Categories:

punches:Anti (So much harder than jacks)
personals:Anti (all jack really mentioned was noble)
flow:Anti (this was the only close category but anti edged it out as well)

vote: Anti



overall the battle was nice, definitely worth the breakdown, i've seen jack come much harder than this but unfortunately this wasn't that time, anti came pretty nice, thought there were some parts that could've been better but overall it brought some damage, good battle guys

[AntiMaTTer]

think im bout to puff puff pass the L you said you had for me.

2-0, glad you showed at least.

[JDR]

Same battle, same verses 2 months ago and you'd be singing a different tune. You've been on boards before so enjoy it while it last. lol, good battle.

[Momeijah]

I ain't gonna bother breaking it down but I'll give a detailed explanation. Anti came with some alright shit and some dope shit, a few typical nameplays but he gave them fresh concepts like the 'questioning jack' one. As far as multis and flow he kept it steady, apart from the 'text champ' line cause noone calls the belt a champ lol, but whatever. Jack u didn't really come personal or as vicious and most of ur punches looked awkwardly worded and forced to me. The 5 mins line and ending one stood out to me but that was about it. Vote: Antimatter.

3-0 AntiMatter Good Battle Closed & Updated Yada Yada.

[Lol_Munteskue]

Ill CONSTRUCT A FLOW with the force to CRUSH HIS BONES with DESTRUCTIVE BLOWS...

So, my fist get "JACK HAMMERED"... an it aint a CONSTRUCTION ZONE!!!...

4/5 I liked the flow, nameplay, multis, etc but it wasn't like an "ohhh shittt" punch, thus not the full points

PLUS...this DUMB FUCK CANT FLOW, acting like you TUCKIN A EAGLE all THUGISH AN EVIL...
This Dudes Weak it takes TWO WEEKS to drop a wack verse against RUGGED AND EVO?!....

2/5 I gotta say i didn't really like it, but the personal was there and it was true from what I remember. Points for flow and multis

Claim you Servin an MERKING SOME "BITCHES"? please...SURELY YOURE KIDDING...
History Lesson..its not Ironic that "Jack The Rippers" only "Well Known For" MURDERING WOMEN!!...

4/5 For a played concept, you pulled this off pretty well. It was worded pretty clean and it just went hard all around

Im Assertive With Wining, you the most SHOOK BITCH IN THE LAND... so Why even BEAT AN EMBARRASS YOU...
Aint your "FOOT PRINTS IN THE SAND" he had a "TOUGH TIME" in the Tourny thats JESUS WHO CARRIED YOU!...

5/5 This was fuckin sick. Straight up.

You Breathings A Miracle, "Undefeated"? ill give you Constant Beatens Im QUICK WITH A LEFT HAND...
Sick With The Text Man,This sites called "Illest Lyrics"..then why the Fuck does this BITCH HAVE THE TEXT CHAMP?

4/5 predictable, but it works.

Fuck Peepin Ya Best Scripts, youll either Leave With Ya Neck Slit or Im BEATEN HIM SENSELESS...
Im A Beast in Ya Presence, now the sites "Questioning Jacks Quality" like DRINKING INSPECTIONS!!...

1/5 i used a similar line to this in my battle with jack. wasnt a fan of this name play

Jack aint EVEN A THREAT WHEN i start Boxing His Mouth until im Knocking His TONSILS OUT...
Fuck a Spatual Im fuckin FLIPPING JACKS and i dont even work at WAFFLE HOUSE!...14

3/5 Jacks are pancakes, but alright. The diss still connected

23/35

I know to admit is tough kidd, but you love Rip, coz I’m mentioned every time he flips his tongue in public
& He musta missed the subject , but I told ‘em NO BLE SHIT, & not the Bitch he Runs Wit

5/5 This was crazy

You can quit the grudge shit & let my nuts shift before clutched fist smoothly bomb next
I can tell ya truly got stress, Coz I keep MAT IN A line like booths at a Movie Complex

3/5 Yeah, I get it but just wasnt that hard of a diss

Soon as this newbie drops text, he cops death, until I got him n Nob in a family sickend feud
Nigga, these hands be rippin’ you, so no wonder “Mat Locked down like the Andy Griffith dude

1/5 didnt really like this line man sorry

Ya hands be split in two, exposin’ the bitch in you, so of course ya rhymes finished & sonned
Have ya brain shot like ya mind mimicks a gun, If this is a “Matter of Time”, then ya 5 Minutes is done.

5/5 sicckkk wit it

Niggas know my lines equipped when they come, scars slow ya breathin as the bars expos ya beatins
It’s not hard, is it suppose to be kidd? But watch me Cool Ant on the streets like cars overheatin’

2/5 just again didnt feel this man

Ya Are so deceivin’, so peep the wins I’ve achieved n been & ya harsh logic stands lame
Bars clog this mans brain, while I got anti drug on the screen like a Narcotics campaign

3/5 clean enough man, this is good

So weither its Nob or Ant from all ya quotes n rants, only here to beef so the site needs these kids
You might believe hes pissed, coz the only ones Fightin’ Over Mat is Noble & the Spike TV Shit

2/5 not the best closer

21/35

MVGT AntiMatter

[Momeijah]

k 4-0 lol. Anyone else posts and ill fucking rape u.