Something You Forgot Pt. 2

[NoVeL]

Keyed This Up To The Lovestoned/Think She Knows Timbo Beat.
Prolly Gonna See This in Audio Slave Soon Anyways. Peep

I Think She Knows That, I Aint Comin Back, Gone Wit The Wind, Dust in The Urn/
Usher in The Chorus, Girl Let it Burn/ Blue Jays Gone Fly Away Bird, Fuckin Absurd
Fuckin Observe/ Out of The Window Dust On The Curb, Nigga Rolled Out, Take A Deep Breath, Blow Smoke Out,
Recess I Regret Uh.. Till Death Part We Went Uh.. Oh Yes I Mean It Uh.. You Scar Like Deep Shit Uh..
Nah

Karma & Pleasure, Drama's Adventure Pardon My C-c-calm & Collective
Pardon My Efforts You'll Marvel At Carmen Electra Like Bombin' The Center
A Trip For The Road & Fulla Shit, Temperature Below Cold Bitter Bitch
Emotions Let Go Like Whoa Getta Grip, Frozen Like Snow On Old City Cliffs
Realest of Shit, I'm Sick of This Shit/ Takin it Hard & Dealin Wit Hits
Shattered My Heart & Broke It To Bits
Fuck Yo House I'm Throwing A Brick, I'm Gone Wit The Wind Like Blown 2 The End
I'm Gone To The End Like Off of The End, Don't Start or Begin
When August You Spent Sum Time in The Den
You Simba Wit Yours, You Lyin'/Lion Again
Don't Cry At End When You Find That Inside You've Expired Again
I'm Finding That Liars in Light of a Sin
Despite How Conniving & Lying You'll Get
I Admire The Time That We've Spent
I'm Lighting A Fire To Desire The End

Thats All I Got So Far, The Rest'll Have To Wait For Audio.. Out

[IntrinsicCadence]

Hmm, I can't decide if I like this or not. First suggestion that comes to mind, don't use 'end' and 'again' so much, it kinda sabotaged your flow. I feel like you got some nice rhythm in here, but the rhyme scheme could use some work. 'End' rhyming with 'end', 'again' rhyming with 'again', 'lyin' 'liars' 'lying' all used within a couple lines, 'shit' being used twice with only five other words in between. This kind of repetition made this piece feel like its just the outline for somethin' that your gonna create later.