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Colossus vs ER215 (Colussus Wins K.O. 3-0)

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Colossus vs ER215 (Colussus Wins K.O. 3-0)

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3 Bars, House Rules
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Quit photoshop and find what ya best at, not rhymin', I been that
ya crew is Makin *Moves 4 an L* like a *knight in a chess match*

He likes giving head that's, why he goes cock in mouth with dudes
He's *down with Munch N' Wood* and I'm *not talkin bout his crew*

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they down to shoot...thinkin they hard...in a GAZEBO lookin tough?!?
Not *spikin drinks at the prom* but I'm *droppin E with the punch*
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Re: Colossus vs ER215

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^^^^^^^^^Somebody did some research :clap: ^^^^^^^^^^^
This kids rhymes are impotent I see your end is imminent/
I'm a hip hop increment you're just a pot that I am shittin in/
Listen boy I X-men and so we all know how this will go/
How you tryna be a star when you barely featured in the show?/
They say brains before bronze is that why can u only spit 6 lines?/
And turning your text silver is the only way that your shines/
*Colossus was barely featured on X-Men (one of the least used)& He has only battled once before this
All my girls be model hot/ Yea your girl she probably not....
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Re: Colossus vs ER215

Post by Omnie »

COLOSSUS

Quit photoshop and find what ya best at, not rhymin', I been that
ya crew is Makin *Moves 4 an L* like a *knight in a chess match*
very nice opener...like the personal and punch

He likes giving head that's, why he goes cock in mouth with dudes
He's *down with Munch N' Wood* and I'm *not talkin bout his crew*
haha...see above

they down to shoot...thinkin they hard...in a GAZEBO lookin tough?!?
Not *spikin drinks at the prom* but I'm *droppin E with the punch*
flow was good, nice wordplay/nameplay

ER215

This kids rhymes are impotent I see your end is imminent/
I'm a hip hop increment you're just a pot that I am shittin in/
okay opener...like the flow on this one, but punch was universal

Listen boy I X-men and so we all know how this will go/
How you tryna be a star when you barely featured in the show?/
flow was still nice and i liked the punch(still not very hard hitting though)

They say brains before bronze is that why can u only spit 6 lines?/
And turning your text silver is the only way that your shines/
good closer...again flow was good, punch was creative, but i dont feel like you attacked

okay...im not a very big fan of research like COLOSSUS', but i understand that it does give the battlers an edge. both came nice with the flow, but COLOSSUS took the personals and punches. ER's whole verse was good, but he one upped you with the research...

VOTE - COLOSSUS
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Re: Colossus vs ER215

Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Aight, I would break this down if I felt it was needed, but I dont. ER came with some witty lines and nice wordplay, but Colossus just came more personal, had wordplay mixed into his shit, and his punches connected well. Granted, he had an edge by collecting the research, but IMO that just means he worked for it more, ya know?

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Re: Colossus vs ER215

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Thanks guys, 2-0, good battle ER
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Re: Colossus vs ER215

Post by Momeijah »

I agree with Murk, both had good bars but Colossus was just clowning on him.

Quit photoshop and find what ya best at, not rhymin', I been that
ya crew is Makin *Moves 4 an L* like a *knight in a chess match*
I've already seen Cee4 use that punch recently so it didn't hit as hard as it would've if this was the 1st time I seen it.

He likes giving head that's, why he goes cock in mouth with dudes
He's *down with Munch N' Wood* and I'm *not talkin bout his crew*
This was the highlight of the battle.

they down to shoot...thinkin they hard...in a GAZEBO lookin tough?!?
Not *spikin drinks at the prom* but I'm *droppin E with the punch*
Played topic but original delivery with the nameplay, decent.


This kids rhymes are impotent I see your end is imminent/
I'm a hip hop increment you're just a pot that I am shittin in/
Good flow and alright punch, nothin personal though.

Listen boy I X-men and so we all know how this will go/
How you tryna be a star when you barely featured in the show?/
I liked this bar it was pretty witty, highlight of ER's verse.

They say brains before bronze is that why can u only spit 6 lines?/
And turning your text silver is the only way that your shines/
{b]Weak closer I'd say, I've seen a load of variations of that punch, pretty universal.[/b]

Vote - Colossus.

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