Across Da Room Feat. HKX, Kurse & Loon E Lou

[HKX]

Illest wats good thought I'd share dis wit ya'll. Dis is a club banger brought 2 u by myself, Kurse & Loon E Lou. Dis song will be featured on my last street album dat I'll be droppin' which I hope 2 have out by December or earlier. Feedback is appreciated... plz feel free 2 leave links so we could feed n e drops u guys have posted.

[Momeijah]

Lol @ 'I'm not a playa but I got a different point of view'.

The beat was nice, it has a whole vibe that would make it fit in on the charts and not sound like it was made by some underground guys. So yeah professional, liked the production a lot, who sung the hook ?

[IntrinsicCadence]

For what it is this is real nice, just not the style I'd chose to listen to myself. Like Moe said the production on it feels real professional, especially the hook. However, I do have some pieces of criticism on it too (hopefully constructive).
I feel your delivery HKX isn't as nice as most of your other pieces, it feels like you shorten up the last syllable of each line you spit a little too much, like the sound of the syllable should hang for just a moment longer. You still got smooth rhythm and it is a nice verse in general, but just doesn't match up to my ear with the high quality you usually spit.
Kurse's delivery matches up with the beat well, only part that seems a bit unnatural is on the 'favor' word towards the end of his verse.
Loon's verse brings a bit of diversity to the flow speed which I think'd be good if this was bumpin in a club, would inspire some change up in the dancin style of them on the dance floor. And his delivery is good, as it always is, but his voice doesn't match up as well with a club kinda dancin bangar to my ear as it does to most of the other tracks I've heard from ya'll. But that might be because I'm more used to his voice matching up with a more lyrical style of hip-hop rather than this kinda club bangar.
Overall, I think this is a well made drop, like I said before it's not the style I'd choose to listen to, so I'll probably only listen to it the two times I gave it a listen in order to give you feedback. But for what it is, and the purpose of its creation, I think u really got something that you could do something with here...

[Deciple]

Yeah after hearing Chi to Cali, HKX and Loon E kinda seemed a bit "outta place" on a track like this... dont get me wrong it was good... just dont picture you all on beats like this with hooks like this.. you all rap better with more "real" tracks... Kurse, i heard few tracks of him and he has that vibe and vocals for a track like this.. over all is was a good track.. like i said tho, its hard to compare to Chi to Cali... After hearing the best, anything less dont sound the same...

[K KiLLaH]

werd mexico in dis bitch lets go shits dope im feelin it one of the better tracks ive heard on the site l8ly