Super Lyrical Blow Out Outside The Office Of Teleportation

[QwarterZ]

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Every scheme is awkward, artwork from Harvard
the hotter the lyric, the harder the fall, posture
of a pre-teen kickin' weak feet I breeze beats
eat freaks, need cheese, touch hearts like E.T.
leave schemes with a fiddle faddle, little rappers
get tickled with a sickle and left in fickle matter
or should I say fecal, people focus on the most evil
non-equals, a blind man with no one to preach too
with jeans blue, acid washed and the knees see through
mince meat you, the sin-a-ma left her boy so Regal
the will-I-am carrying doesn't compare to black eyed peas
transport back like see, straight up mac like cheese
carry a broken speaker box, leavin' thoughts creepin' off
just so you know I came hard I started to beat it off
leave a drop on here just cuz I needed to see some props
figaro, delivery or not, I compare chivalry to thoughts
if they ever limit me to loss, get your figurine tossed
treated like rag dolls, take the mask off, and back off
smack y'all back to the roots, no need for any black thoughts
I pass off wizardy lyrically, pick at sixteen ignorant teens
line em up spit a scheme that'll leave em lifted...sticky weed

[IntrinsicCadence]

First off, I like the title LOL, though I'm not quite sure what it has to do with the written piece. U got some nice multis here and there, flow stays on point, but u seem to loose focus on what ur actually trying to say. Your kinda all over the place with that, which makes it a bit hard to stay interested in it as I'm reading through.

[Momeijah]

What the fuck do u walk around with a vial of PCP round ur neck or somethin.

Lol jk I liked the flow most of all and once again I agree with Candy up there about the topic. I don't really give a fuck about the topic in drops like these though I like random shit. I saw that fuckin 'come hard' line and the second I seen those words I was gonna quote em in the feed like 'laaaame' but it turned out to be an original wordplay with the 'beat it off' part added in.

Overall I got no complaints about this it was good for what it was and I read the whole thing in Master Shake's voice which is a bonus.

[Phasewon]

Nice shit, went with the beat perfectly, flow and structure was on point, multies were present yet simple in some areas, solid verse though.