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Flipped and Reversed Backwards

Post by Viral »

dissapear to reappear stalkin ya frame//
dissin peers den steer a queer talkin in flames//
listen hear ur fearin beers walkin wit shame//
pistons cheer im clearin spears squawkin for blame//
stop da game ima tame dis dame n explain da rain//
inner vein creatin pain thru my hitler like reign//
killin ya mayne like 50 cent feelin da bane//
willin ta train soldiers to get at ya brain//

(1 month ago)


~~~Flipped in reverse and backwards~~~

(today)

im always here so keep ur syringes in hand//
spirals feared deep insicions by strand//
no vaccine leavin u dead like a crack scene//
splat spleen mad gas like a black bean//
is dat mean? hunched over wit my slack lean//
pause yet inter-act-ing//
paws wit splinter-tacked-meat//
my jaws r winter cracked seats//
flipped the switch n get ripped n stiched//
jipped a bitch got her tripped den ditched//
lift ya wrists before i shift da mist//
stick to mits cuz bitch ya pisst//
i resist a-rrest den persist ta-pest//
physi-cist da best per-cyst i rest//



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Post by complexity »

non stop rhyming, i felt it, really short, but just kinda flowed along.

stop da game ima tame dis dame n explain da rain//
inner vein creatin pain thru my hitler like reign//

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Post by drunken jesus »

I don't get the topic really, nothign was reversed lol

Same comment as i left on your other verse, your rhyme schemes good but you force alot of multis to make it look good
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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