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Wake Up Call

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WpshqudVso8[/video]

start @ 0:30 my friends :D

With the ego of Gods, I collect the c-notes and scars
plus see hope in bars, convicted by e-vol's of hearts
thru the peep-hole I spark, shine thru like a diamond
illuminate the stars, with my insight like blindmen
shocking, like a rat biting the wires, supply the suppliers
rebirthed in flame just like I took my flight in the fire
fightin' fire with the same flame that burned Prometheus
like a lie detector, pen scribblin' back n forth see me buzz
peer pressure from the writin', leave me drunk off love
with instrumentals that get touched, while I bust off lust
trust y'all thugs, backpackers and so on, see a resurrection
best connection from the head the chest then like Church collection
I stack up change, don't fix a thing, but with this I bling
fix my sling, take another hit and when it's missed I swing
in the midst of things, I hit the web like a garden tarantula
demanded ya ice and chains, drop it like the avalanche to ya
whole body, spokesperson from the masses, grab y'all Hip Hop passes
you'll only get pain and death like Mel before y'all get y'all passion...
Last edited by QwarterZ on Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:03 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Wake Up Call

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I can see you got some inspiration from Nas' verse on that beat. Great use of multi's in this one. Just an overall good verse, keep writin
"Until we're all free fuck the world pass the weed, life ain't what it seems y'all we chasin fantasies"-Lastchild [R.I.P]
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With the ego of Gods, I collect the c-notes and scars
plus see hope in bars, convicted by e-vol's of hearts
thru the peep-hole I spark, shine thru like a diamond
illuminate the stars, with my insight like blindmen

lIKED THIS A LOT ^^


whole body, spokesperson from the masses, grab y'all Hip Hop passes
you'll only get pain and death like Mel before y'all get y'all passion...


pretty cool closer tooo ^


nice piece here Q
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Re: Wake Up Call

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At first I thought the content was a bit shallow but after giving it a second read I could definitely glean something more from this piece.
shocking, like a rat biting the wires, supply the suppliers
rebirthed in flame just like I took my flight in the fire
fightin' fire with the same flame that burned Prometheus
like a lie detector, pen scribblin' back n forth see me buzz
^^ I was really feeling the flow here. Keep it up, man.
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I like this. Enjoy ya topics cos you usually bring something different. Flow was nice and multies on point. Good drop.
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:o thanx guys, glad you took time to read it :D
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