leeroi vs cory (Cory wins KO)

[leeroi green]

5 bars due 1hr 15min after you check lose if youre late me too good luck

[leeroi green]

yo

....who are YOU NIGGA?!! oh ok now ya say ya cory/
shit if all the mods moderated you couldnt corroborate ya story/

im all terrain if my road rugged i floor it to the ground ignore this suckas shouts/
disney need to be on tv before i let cory in the house/

i write at an impossible pace you'll be fossils and change/
aliases before you realize you made a collosal mistake/

he change his name because the kid got insecurities/
last time you seen a bar you did security/

fuck your MPD get rug burned get losses be C or Y/
retreat or die cus ye couldnt be saved if you received jesus christ/

EASY

[Kuhlerblynd]

Green

....who are YOU NIGGA?!! oh ok now ya say ya cory/
shit if all the mods moderated you couldnt corroborate ya story/

This is definitely a coll concept, but not delivered into a real effective hard hitting punch IMO.

im all terrain if my road rugged i floor it to the ground ignore this suckas shouts/
disney need to be on tv before i let cory in the house/

Eh, the punch doesnt work for me man, but I did like the set up used in this.

i write at an impossible pace you'll be fossils and change/
aliases before you realize you made a collosal mistake/

I did laugh at this, even though he's not Colossus. I'm not sure if that's what you were getting at, but if you werent, then you got one in here. Not bad at all. Wouldve been much more effective if it were true.

he change his name because the kid got insecurities/
last time you seen a bar you did security/

This isnt a bad bar at all. You rhymed insecurities with security though, and as much as the differences in the definition as apparent, it still kinda hurts your bar when those are the only rhyming syllables in it. I thought the line was good though, even though 'bar' lines are played.

fuck your MPD get rug burned get losses be C or Y/
retreat or die cus ye couldnt be saved if you received jesus christ/

YES! WORDPLAY! Im a big wordplay fan man, and your set up here is solid. The punchline could be considered played as fuck, but I thought you delivered it really well, and your set up was good also. Best bar of the verse all around IMO.

Cory

Can't even scratch the surface w/ this cats claws, my raps raw
You'd think this bitches roots were from queens w/ the way he "Yak Ballz"

Lol okay, pretty universal punch IMO but it was funny. Set up tied into the punchlines. Good opener.

If you The Last Dragon then I'm Galen -- Leeroi = BIGGEST FAIL!
I spit flames bitch, create a Reign of Fire & watch this "christian BAIL!!!"

This was funny too, but again pretty universal. I thought the wordplay was solid though.

Call you Green cuz you hoe dirt, call me Rugged cuz I'ma cold jerk
No relation to you being black, but I put "LG In The Box" like a TV that don't work

I laughed at this one. Good nameflip too. The set up was weak though IMO.

Teach this foolish dyke a lesson, try to act rude & dude you'll bite the wesson
I'm #1, heard you got a potty-mouth so "Green ur-ine trouble" like UTI infections

Man, I've seen so many You're in/ ur-ine lines is crazy. This one didnt really stand out to me bro. The first line was filler too IMO.

I put a 'Price on ya head' like celebrity autographs, still Green's herb'ing it
Sorry, but unlike your avatar this 'out of body experience' will be PERMANENT!

Haha, this was a cool concept. Thought the punch could have been worded better, but it was still effective.


Over-all, Green could have stolen this one if he would have had one or two more solid bars. It's almost like Cory slept on him in this one, and Rugged should konw better than to do that. Green, your punches were worded better in this battle than with Nep and I think you did better with some wordplay too. Getting those two things going would make you dangerous in the battlegrounds.

My vote goes to Cory. More consistant punches, and punches win battles. His multi scheme was better too, and his flow was as a result with that. I have to say though, Green came up with some solid concepts. Getting that stuff worded right will make a huge difference.

[Kau the Lion]

I got to go with Cory on this one. It was pretty close but a few of his punches just hit a bit harder. Some nice wordplay on both sides. Flow was good equally. Mostly, I think Leeroi lost it his wording. Just couldn't get the oomph in his punches.

+1 Cory

[Ambiguous Realm]

i wont break it down but basically it seemed a little to lean to one side a bit more

rhymescheme :fruitcake (lee had maybe 1 decent multi)
punches: queerass (probably the closest category here)
personals: faggot (only personal lee had was some names and mentionin mod)

vote: Courtney


no hate leeroi i did laugh at that cory in the house line, and the security one was koo too, not bad for a quick battle i guess



*3-0 someone close this cause i'm still off duty bitch!

[Kuhlerblynd]

Thread closed and records updated.


Cory wins this KO.