Phantoms

[MonuMental]

My memories never cease to hold me chained to beastly phantoms,
Damn em, wanna fight but if I slam em we'll be slammed in tandem,
Canned inside an asylum night and day I pray a timely end comes,
To abate what I feel the kiss of steel upon my sinner's lips numbs,
Me so silently, yet inside of me the scene is souring, showering,
Me with doubts and pain from times I tried but failed to reach,
The outer edge of the ledge of the razor runnin through my head,
Bitter directions for where to tread carved into my flesh,
Stand the test of the times I thought I was probably doin best,
To stay up above the water in my sea of dead regrets,
Scar tissue, staring up with ugly eyes, so ugly lies,
Pour through my mind and out my mouth so my mother never cries,
To see the fate of the state of her boy's mind would never do,
So lyin for the sake of what's sacred is just fine, until I'm through,
With life or pain perhaps or pushed through invisible barriers,
With powers no other person has to repair my dead interior,
Nothin's ever known about the unknown to a person till they try it,
If I survive it in another life and like it I may just buy it,
A reminder that I'm down to down my brain to turn down the pain,
Homemade lobotomy, sloppily kill the soul and leave an empty frame,
Many words to say when it gets worse cause you know that at it's worst,
Free choice is your curse cause if you choose the dirt here comes the hearse.


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[Noctoural88]

I like it better than your last drop. you still have the nice imagery, and this one also has the nice vocab, but you shortened the bars a bit and i dont see those streched lines, cheers. rhyme schemes still need a bit of work though

[MonuMental]

Thanks, bruh, I was looking to capture those really nasty vibes with this one in a different way than I have before. I tried to keep my bars easily spittable, cause spittin is half the love for me. I appreciate your feedback, fully!!