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a keystyle cause im bored

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spit this rap game with two courts- and kid youre games a few short/
this is the new sport/ like x-games infect-sane lyricists wit new board-
submissions spittin split decisions into *illest lyrics* i *kill this here quick*/

mentally unstable/like viral and ekoms- whos sellin lyrics under tha table/

i like pullin the slots handle/ love to gamble- leave opponents *diced* -
like the veggies in cambells-soup time to regroup and alleyoup these loops

dont ask me what im writin im jottin it quick- droppin it sick/
tossin these kids- some thought into spits- like god in the midst-

of too many weak emcees- easily-creamed in these/
rap boards by people who flow breezily/

keep in mind this spits for shits and giggles/
mind state skipped in tripples- not thinkin clearly like trips to jiggles/ (a bar)


yea this was just like 2 mins so dont diss me for it lmao
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nice drop...i can tell it was a quickie...but u havent been writin for awhile so its pretty dope for a 2 month absent leave...haha...8/10 keep it up
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Post by drunken jesus »

shits on alot of the wack fucks on here

with some practice and developement you could be ill

6.5/10
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

lol that has the be the worst i ever seen from u.. but doesn't seem like u were trying to impress n e one lol.. a very confusing peice it was..n eways lol keep droppin
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Post by precise »

haha, thanks, i dont need to impress people with keystyles, ill save that for competitions, im just tryin to entertain myself with things like this lol. thanks for the feed lmao
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fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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