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Orfadox, ya bodied

Post by JDR »

I noticed ya drop so here ya go sonny

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/ripp- ... ml#p161755
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/wake- ... ml#p161756


Orfadox, aiight.

Excuse me as I go off to laugh, you say that’s a response? Psh, I call it whack
Dox aint got the balls to rap, why even type a response when you done lost to Jack?
You niggas are an awful catch, so really, I don’t need the truth, spare me
Even ya feed is too weary, take you serious? I’d rather believe in the tooth fairy
Orfadox don’t seem too scary,You a mess chump, ya text sucks and that’s it
Ya best punch cant attack Rip, & ya career is gonna stay more messed up than ya accent
You might of impressed tha fucks in ya whack click but really, you aint fuckin’ wit me
& its ugly to beef but the only thing this nigga serves is crumpets & tea
I’d murk Dox in public wit ease, but it’s not worth the strain to be concerned wit lames
Yeah, you aint the first that’s came, but guarantee I leave Dox a mess like a Hurricane
Ya netcee life burst in flames, Everybody knows I came to murder ya
The shames burnin’ ya, cos the only niggas that can Stomach Rip got inflamed hernias
& I’m droppin’ heat wit a verse or free, so logically, Dox will need surgery
I hope ya country does not believe they earned they peace
Coz if not for the states, Dox & his nazi peeps are property of Germany
*Hitler Salute*
Ha, and it shows ya mad, man. Exposed from the flows of ya whack clan
Get owned by Jacks hands, leavin’ Orfadox in closed wit more holes than an afghan
Ya see thru like poles wit a glass stand, and I know you respectin’ me
But check his free, this niggas so desperate that he has to beg for feed
His text to me aint impressin’ peeps, really, Jack don’t see the Joke
Orf a beast? Then nope! We more realistic nigga and don’t believe in ‘hope’
& I seen ya quote, black or white? I shoulda known you came whack
But regardless what Race Jack is in, this nigga aint on the same track
White flag, victory lap over misery kats, I don’t need to notice this man
I compete wit champs while Orf can barely twist the bottom like deodorant cans
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Orfadox don’t seem too scary,You a mess chump, ya text sucks and that’s it
Ya best punch cant attack Rip, & ya career is gonna stay more messed up than ya accent
You might of impressed tha fucks in ya whack click but really, you aint fuckin’ wit me
& its ugly to beef but the only thing this nigga serves is crumpets & tea

these bars had me laughing dog lmfao nice shit



I hope ya country does not believe they earned they peace
Coz if not for the states, Dox & his nazi peeps are property of Germany
*Hitler Salute*

Damn JAck, Damn ^


Ha, and it shows ya mad, man. Exposed from the flows of ya whack clan
Get owned by Jacks hands, leavin’ Orfadox in closed wit more holes than an afghan

This was A Hella dope punch! best bar i think ^



overall very effective diss
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Thanks for the feed brotha.
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Nice verse but it was a bit overkill, huh? I'm just wondering when the rest of your "crew" is gonna weigh in on this.
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Well What Can I Say Man...Definatly I Nice Peice Had Me Laughing With Most Of These Line's...Even Though Its Aimed At Me I Aint Gunna Lie Probably One Of The Best Diss Peice's Iv Seen You Drop
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Yezzir wrote:Lol @ These assholes still jocking their own crew.

Jack, me you and the rest of Illest knows you bodied dun homie. Nice piece. I'd leave more extensive feed but that asshole Murk will just delete it anyways for talking shit about his wack ass crew.
Please, quote where that happened in this thread. I even referred to it as overkill. The only jocking here is you jocking Jack.
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I'd like to add that your last three posts were all over Jack's dick, as well.
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Thx for the feed. Didnt mean to overkill just seen ya response Dox and started typin'. Hadn't even read the drop until now. Either way..thx for tha exchange. It was fun.
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Haha Yeah Man This Aint No Serious Shit I Know Just An Excuse For Me To Try Different Style's Haha Anyway I Replied To This Look Forward To Your Response
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Orfadox don’t seem too scary,You a mess chump, ya text sucks and that’s it
Ya best punch cant attack Rip, & ya career is gonna stay more messed up than ya accent
Ha, and it shows ya mad, man. Exposed from the flows of ya whack clan
Get owned by Jacks hands, leavin’ Orfadox in closed wit more holes than an afghan
Looks like you working on the multies Jack, I like it. Goes well with your punches. You and Q make a good tag team... witty & hard punchlines. Keep the beef going.. makes visiting Writtens forum worth it.
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Yezzir wrote:Lol @ These assholes still jocking their own crew.

Jack, me you and the rest of Illest knows you bodied dun homie. Nice piece. I'd leave more extensive feed but that asshole Murk will just delete it anyways for talking shit about his wack ass crew.


Um.... When have I ever deleted shit? You all of a sudden seem to have a fucking problem with me JJ... Would you like to visit the call out section...?????
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haha, been a minute since i seen TOYH battle. He use to be pretty nice .. .but i'm a stay out of this beef. I have enough peeps beefing with me as is. lol




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this verse was prety dope with a lot of quoteables
I laughed all the way through the end

thks

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